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The Meadow

Floating on the low flying cloud that looks like Shriek Over the meadow full of purple cone flower decked A road in the very far distance does it go into town Where the peace of the meadow with sound is drown Thank you cloud for the ride over the mountain, many trees Your comfortable cushion I've ridden with a day's ease Let me down gently into the meadow so fair I don't want to go back to life with reality so bare

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John Freeman

Date: 1/13/2010 9:33:00 AM

I have a poem called " Sacred Season" that reminds me of the journeys I take in the spirit of God's Love. I will post it later. You mmight like it. Sincerely, Love, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 1/13/2010 9:29:00 AM

Sara I have very pleasant dreams at night that this Couplet of your's describe very precisely. I call it floating in the Spirit of God's Love. I float over sacred mountains, stream, and valleys. Some of the most peaceful and beautiful places I visit. So peaceful, in fact, I don't want to come back. It's like being a liquid stream of God's Love flowing like life's river.. Smile, Love, Moses

Danny Nunn

Date: 1/13/2010 6:08:00 AM

All of your poems are nice and peaceful, like a flowing feeling, such as this one, good write..thanks on Arsenic...no not a tall tale, this one is true..it is just poem, but gives one the general idea...in my book it get 5 chapters and more detail...a stroke leaves damage forever, arsenic is only for a short while..the body does need a small amount arsenic, like insulin...but only a small amount...it is all good and makes for writing a good book...if you live thru it...thanks Danny

Daver Austin

Date: 1/12/2010 11:38:00 AM

I love riding your cloud. I'll lay me down in that meadow any day. Love, daver

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/12/2010 11:00:00 AM

Awesome poetry today Sara... Keep em coming....:JP]

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/12/2010 10:21:00 AM

A wonderful serenity emanates from this beautiful write Sara! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Also many thanks for your always kind comments and words of encouragement. All is truly appreciated! Have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/12/2010 6:22:00 AM

Sara, this is one of your best writes in my opinion. Please keep sharing with us. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/12/2010 12:41:00 AM

Floating high, gazing down. Nice and relaxing. Thank you for your lovely comments to me. cheers Margaret

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/11/2010 6:11:00 PM

beautiful poem mom, hope your life is not that bare, think about the good things!! :)

Carole Cookie Arnold

Date: 1/11/2010 5:00:00 PM

This is a great childs poem too Well done Thank You for your wonderful review Love Cookie

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 1/11/2010 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Sara for your constructive support! I always look forward to your reads as well. This one especially carries me away also. Nicely written!! Jeralynn