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The doer within— Silent enabler, unseen Works behind the scene; Now look at ego, Pretender and a big show, Why can’t it lie low? ________________________ Reflections |05.03.18 |

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Date: 4/6/2020 7:17:00 PM
It is only through the window of the heart that we can see rightly. A brilliant short poem sir A.
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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 6/17/2020 1:54:00 AM
Thanks for liking it... but today after so many days when I look at it, and when that motherly feelings of one's own creation are no longer so strong, I feel the diction sounds a bit laboured. Any comments?

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