Aniruddha Pathak Poet Triolet

Seen, Unseen

The doer within—
Silent enabler, unseen
Works behind the scene;

Now look at ego,
Pretender and a big show,
Why can’t it lie low?
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   Reflections |05.03.18 |

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JC Brul April 6, 2020 at 7:17 PM It is only through the window of the heart that we can see rightly. A brilliant short poem sir A. Aniruddha Pathak June 17, 2020 at 1:54 AM Thanks for liking it... but today after so many days when I look at it, and when that motherly feelings of one's own creation are no longer so strong, I feel the diction sounds a bit laboured. Any comments?