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What is this strange place we find ourselves in, caged in the open and yet free within, illusion spirals engulf our being, fickle attention thus oscillating; shaky awareness in turbid currents simply swept away as a leaf in winds, until we so choose void of cessation, here ever present, in each vibration, at poignant moment of each breath exchange, as also the gap between two thought trains, within which, dear soul we exit stupor, unshackling our self from hypnotic trance, whereupon we are, as we are, thus free, from narrow fetters of our lower mind. 08-April-2021 Anacreontic Verse Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One 5-syllables per line checked on PS syllable counter

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Date: 7/29/2021 6:52:00 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
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Date: 7/29/2021 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One! Hope to see more of you around, once again.

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