The Mayflower Sails

Under a tall cottonwood tree that grows along the curb...
  two burly men stand next to a giant truck, and smoke one last cigarette...
              They inhale one final puff, before climbing aboard.
Trails of smoke intermingle with the white puffs of cotton, that drift from the tree...

The moving van wears a big red proclamation "Mayflower"...
  ....a big, white, dinosaur, that seems so out of place, parked along my street.

I grab her hand as we watch the driver start the motor...
           ,and soon the truck slowly lumbers down the road.
                  It turns the corner, and disappears out of sight.
In that massive monster, things were neatly stacked.
     Cardboard boxes, securely taped, memories neatly packed
               A part of her history, and mine, ...are transported away. 
 
Years of a sisterhood, a bonding
A friendship, like none that either of us had known before.

Fresh faced, young, and with great expectations, our first meeting was long ago.
Charmed lives, of husbands, children, homes, car-pools, PTA meetings.
A sharing of troubles, joys, the celebrations, the sorrows.  
Today those memories are taking a journey, tucked away on that truck.
          Chicken-pox that her Michael gave my son.
          My favorite chicken casserole recipe that became her family's favorite too.
          My shoulder for her tears, when cancer was feared.
          Little talks, over a painted white fence, that started our days,
                  ....And ended them too. 
          We grew into womanhood together, side by side.

And now, her husband, patiently waits by their car,
Giving her one last moment, her eyes glisten with unshed tears.
Mine sting too...but I had promised I wouldn't cry...so I don't.
A quick hug..       "Yes...we'll write...we'll visit...we'll call!"

She walks to her packed car, turns once more with that
    familiar smile, the same little wave, that she gave me
        on that very first morning, as she stood at her mailbox.
                    She jumps in next to her waiting husband.

     He starts the engine, and soon their car is heading down the street, 
         that is no longer her street.
               Around the turn at the corner, 
                    that is no longer her corner,

              She is gone.

                Tomorrow the SOLD sign comes down.

                       Perhaps a new wave, another smile, someone gathering mail
                                                                                ....   will brighten my day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 3/10/2009 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Fantastic Free Verse contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/8/2009 12:36:00 PM
Dear Carrie - This poem is truly wonderful and a bit heartbreaking. After reading the other reviewers, I believe we all at one point in our life had to say goodbye to a dear friend or loved one. You captured that feeling so tenderly in this lovely poem. CONGRATULATIONS on your WIN in Christie's contest. Wishing you & your loved one's a Happy & Blessed Easter. Peace and hugs always, John
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Date: 3/7/2009 2:05:00 PM
Howdy neighbor - I just wanted to congratulate you on your place in Christie's contest - YF4L, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/6/2009 4:03:00 PM
A special neighbor makes life so much happier..I hope you two have stayed in touch.Congrats on this win in the contest. BG
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Date: 3/6/2009 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie on your win with this beautifl poem of love and friendship that good neighbors can bring to our lives. It s sad when we must part with them. The hopeful tone at the end is a beautifl touch! Excellent piece, my friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/6/2009 12:41:00 PM
Poignant words in this amazing piece, congrats on you win...Raul
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Date: 3/6/2009 12:39:00 PM
Hi Carrie...this is so sad and so warm at the same time... I hope you are still in touch with each other.... congrats on your win
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Date: 3/6/2009 10:59:00 AM
Oh Carrie, this is so heartbreaking. Reminds me of when my best friend moved out to Michigan (from NJ), I was lost, empty and lonely. So sorry I ever missed this one! It is absolutely amazing. Congratulations on your most well deserved win in Christie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:59:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:15:00 AM
such a heart touching write... great job... congrats!! ~ Arany
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Date: 8/11/2008 1:37:00 PM
a very touching poem, warm and tender. thank you for reading my A Godly Saint and for your kind comment
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Date: 8/10/2008 4:58:00 AM
Sad and melancholy, touching on life. We lived in an alley, the second house in a row of seven. I wouldn't trade those years or those neighbors for a castle and an entourage. Wonderful write. Vince
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Date: 8/10/2008 3:46:00 AM
Oh, this is so so so SAD! I left my home and best friends and family behind when I left Canada, and it breaks my heart...beautilly written with hope at the end...awesome and sad, love Kristin
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