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The Masterpiece

His heart pumped love and on that day that he was defeated and needed to see it, he slit wrists and proceeded to bleed it, he dipped pen tip to its crimson cascade, opened his notebook and wrote his last page in a flowing script that screamed his peace even took the time to dot the i's two times apiece and as he finished he smiled at all of his light in it at his joy and his strife in it, his death and his life in it and he broke his smile for the last breath at least to name his death, his poem, his life "The Masterpiece"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/9/2010 4:17:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jacob. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/7/2010 7:43:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of Poets... luv.. "Sweetheart" ...
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:38:00 AM
very good write and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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