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The Marvelous Cardboard Box

The Marvelous Cardboard Box

By Elton Camp

As a child I had toys just like the rest,
But there was one item that I liked best
You might say it wasn’t even a toy at all
The strong cardboard box, four feet tall

It held a new appliance from the store
I’d never seen a box near that fine before
I was afraid that I would be out of luck
My Dad said to throw back onto the truck

When I asked to keep the box around
He agreed with a disapproving frown
“You have no need for it that I can see,
But if you want to have it, OK with me.”

That big box became my own fine retreat
And to me, it was almost like a hotel suite
It was where I could crawl right on inside
Anytime that I decided I wanted to hide

And in my imagination, I had no doubt
As a fort, it would keep the Indians out
Too, when I decided a hermit I would be,
Then it became a private, dark cave to me

For months, the box stayed in good shape
Even the pouring rain it was able to take
I one day cut out windows and a front door
And then I could pretend like never before

That it finally wore out couldn’t be denied
Then I cut it all apart and made me a slide
I’d scoot on it right down the steep hill
So it was a wonderful thing to me still

The box I had several decades in the past
But, fond memories, the box did outlast
If such a box should now fall into my care
To play with it even now, I just might dare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/15/2010 4:46:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Elton. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:36:00 AM
Ahhh! what memories this poem brings back to me. A very enjoyable read for me today. The rhyming and meter is very good. I think you have a keeper here and one with which many can identify. Great write my friend. I'm new to Poetry Soup, and I'm not rating your poem because I'm not sure about the numbering system. I would give it the highest rating, but I'm not sure if that would be a 1 or a 7.
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:33:00 AM
Elton, I wrote a poem about a box not long ago..it was so lame I never posted it. I love yours..Your rhyme scheme is very good..not forced..BG
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:03:00 AM
excuse me that should say I am not the only one
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:01:00 AM
i see not not the only the liked cardboard boxes enjoyed hope it does well
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