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The Man in the Moon's Surprise

The man in the moon crooned such a tune That the cow jumped over and mooned But a methane gas The bovine did pass The man struck a match and kaboom!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/13/2014 10:48:00 PM
Carolyn This is so funny and creative. HHHMMM Made me laugh and giggle. Thank you for the sweet and silly comment on my Wild Night poem.
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s "Pooping" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 1:27:00 AM
Congrats on your smelly win xx
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Date: 5/22/2012 7:33:00 PM
Carolyn, I think yours is really a good one. Congrats on HM.
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Date: 5/22/2012 3:31:00 PM
I thought that this one was funny...Got a chuckle...Congrats on your winning work...Sara
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Date: 5/9/2010 9:00:00 PM
lol.the last line makes it hilarious Carolyn. haha.i enjoy actual funny limericks.(: your imagery was great in this. thanks for the laugh.you did awesome.and im glad that i am a poet friend that you can call one of your favorites for a reason important to you, ill make sure that i never change just to be a good friend in the way you see me.have a wonderful night. -Always
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Date: 3/27/2010 2:29:00 PM
Cute and made me laugh. Thanks! Irish
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:58:00 PM
This was just funny!!! That is all I can or will say...love you...Rob
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Date: 3/25/2010 2:24:00 PM
now that is funny!! LOL!
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Date: 3/23/2010 10:38:00 AM
Very silly one! I enjoyed that.
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:33:00 AM
LOL ok that was just funny
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:59:00 PM
lol this is a good one
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:57:00 PM
Clever and witty write , as ever , Carolyn .Your warm humor smiles on , and thanks for your kind words ....
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Date: 3/19/2010 3:03:00 AM
That is hilarious Carolyn Haha
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:04:00 PM
Dontcha love limericks!! LOL absolutely priceless ... what a wonderful imagination you have!! I've added this to my fav list ...
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Date: 3/18/2010 9:31:00 AM
This is so funny! I just love limericks. Thanks for your comments. Sue
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Date: 3/17/2010 2:32:00 AM
Carolyn, I needed a good laugh this morning. And here are your words to give it again. Thank you for your friendship. You are a wonderful friend. Love, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/14/2010 7:24:00 PM
thanks for comment funny hope you do well the Holy spirit is truth he leads you into all truth my word is learm and keep his
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Date: 3/13/2010 6:16:00 AM
Caroline, Cute, funny, and brilliant! What more can be said? This is one of the best around! Love, Tom
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:29:00 AM
Carolyn, LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL!LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! I see your funny bone has been busy!!! I love this one! Environmental awareness in nursery rhyme style is the bomb! Kaboom! You won my laughter! Smiles and Love, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/12/2010 4:56:00 PM
Great write, I enjoyed the read. I wonder if that is how you make hamburger? I needed that laugh. Caryl
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Date: 3/12/2010 2:58:00 PM
ha... like the ending...kaboom:)
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:08:00 PM
Ha ha, made me chuckle big style Carolyn >> James
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Date: 3/12/2010 10:42:00 AM
GOOD ONE, Carolyn. Hey, when you said tune, I thought you were gonna say the cow turned to "moon" the farmer. that works too. hahaha. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:01:00 AM
That was so fun to read, enchanting and yes, I am laughing.. a winner for sure... Constance
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