Barbara Gorelick Poet Quatrain

The Man In the Halloween Moon

It seems the old man in the moon looks down
On spooks and things that fly through the night
They blithely pass across his golden sphere
Giving those Halloween lovers a ghostly fright..


10/12/15

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Phyllis Babcock November 1, 2015 at 11:49 AM Congrats on your win. Nicely done. love phyl

Robert Lindley October 22, 2015 at 8:50 PM Congrats on your win my friend. A7

Constance La France October 22, 2015 at 2:32 PM Barbara, a big CONGRATULATIONS to you for this spooky write and thanks for visiting my Halloween Moon poem ~~

Paul Callus October 22, 2015 at 12:09 PM A most suitable Halloween atmosphere created by just four lines, Barbara. ~ Congratulations on your top placement! ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2015 at 12:43 AM Hey congrats on your win. It's awesome to see these Halloween poems all again!

James Inman October 21, 2015 at 7:33 AM Lovely, Barbara.

Connie Marcum Wong October 21, 2015 at 6:59 AM Wow, the photo I have with my entry would be perfect for your poem Barbara. Congratulations on your top win with this creative piece my friend!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 20, 2015 at 11:01 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Barbara!

Dan Cwiak October 20, 2015 at 10:37 PM Really well done, Barbara. Congrats on your win.

Viv Wigley October 20, 2015 at 10:31 PM ....and behold, it came to pass, and thus did well. Congrats, Barbara! Viv x

John Lawless October 20, 2015 at 10:31 PM ....the shadows of that moon will make the lovers hug more tightly....

Eve Roper October 20, 2015 at 9:31 PM Congratulations on your win, and thank you so much for participating in my contest.

Debbie Guzzi October 20, 2015 at 8:13 PM So nice to read your writing this evening, thank you. Light & Love

Jan Allison October 20, 2015 at 5:50 PM really enjoyed this one Barbara - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight October 20, 2015 at 4:56 PM Love your 'Halloween Moon' poem, Barbara. Congratulations on your nice 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Viv Wigley October 18, 2015 at 1:36 PM This will do well, Barbara, nicely done. Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong October 16, 2015 at 3:09 AM This is great Barbara. I have been trying to do one, but I need more lines. Best of luck in the contesr.

Kelly Deschler October 15, 2015 at 12:14 AM A wonderful poem that captures the magic and the spirit of Halloween. I really enjoyed this, Barbara!... Good luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2015 at 3:55 PM Cute one, Barbara. Good luck in this contest.