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The Mailbox

He remembers when his many bolts weren't ringed in rust, and his seams weren't blackened with years of grime and dust. The post upon which he sat was gray and weathered now, and had become just slightly west of plumb somehow. The screw that held his little flag had long ago come loose, chipped and faded, no longer red, it was of little use. The driveway that he guarded was dirt and deeply sloped, and halfway down it gently curved around a massive oak. Now some might think that he'd be bored, stuck there night and day, but he found entertainment in the things that came his way. He pondered long and hard on things before making up his mind, there was no hurry, he reasoned, when all you have is time. He carefully watched a nest of ants both day and night for weeks, before he reached the conclusion that ants must never sleep. He marveled at the seasons and loved both sun and snow, but sometimes he felt beaten down when the wind-whipped rain would blow. He loved the feel of bird feet when they used him as a perch, and when a truck would rumble by he'd feel his spirit lurch. He delighted in the field mice, and wept with the mourning doves, was suspicious of the furry raccoons, with their masks and leather gloves. Though days and months and years went by, and he was oft ignored, his life of perfect stillness was itself a rich reward. So as we hurtle past him, with our tires spitting rocks, perhaps we could learn something from our stoic old mailbox.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/15/2009 2:59:00 AM
Dear Danielle, I did receive your soup mail and have replied. I love this poem and will get your certificate out to you if you will please send me your mailing address again at the email address below. I don't know why I never received it and I apologize. Lainie
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Date: 8/15/2008 11:17:00 PM
Dear Danielle, Your poem - The Mailbox - is a Brilliant example of a personification and has won an honorable mention in my contest. Please send your mailing address to: elaine.george@sympatico.ca so I may forward you a certificate of poetic excellence from MemorElaine Publishing House. Congratulations! Love and best wishes, Lainie
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Date: 8/15/2008 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations Danielle on your Honorable Mention in Elaine's Personification contest. Outstanding write. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/11/2008 3:33:00 AM
Very good Danielle, I enjoyed reading you work. The Imagery was fantastic. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep writing, Best of wishes Dave
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Date: 7/9/2008 5:02:00 AM
Danielle, congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2008 7:16:00 AM
You're quite the reminiscent story teller. I like that through it all...it stood. Excellent work. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. My best, Charlie
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Date: 7/8/2008 5:16:00 AM
What a delightful poem, Danielle! I like the beginning stanzas describing the tattered but dignified mailbox and the last four stanzas. "...a life of perfect stillness..." is a mantra for us all. Well done!
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Date: 7/7/2008 3:22:00 PM
Hi Danielle I really enjoyed this poem very much. I like your writing style. Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/7/2008 9:32:00 AM
this was a wonderful poem - excellent personification on something we all take for granted - congrats on the feature
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Date: 7/7/2008 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on "The Mailbox" being featured. God Bless, D- (gotcha)- Danielle. Vince
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Date: 7/7/2008 6:13:00 AM
Congrad on being featured poem I loved it You really gave a lot of thought to it. keep writing you got talent!
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Date: 7/6/2008 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations on having this very well written poem featured this week. What a joy to read. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/6/2008 5:28:00 PM
Congratulations Danielle on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Well deserved. Love, Shar
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