The Mailbox

He remembers when his many bolts
weren't ringed in rust,
and his seams weren't blackened
with years of grime and dust.

The post upon which he sat
was gray and weathered now,
and had become just slightly
west of plumb somehow.

The screw that held his little flag
had long ago come loose,
chipped and faded, no longer red,
it was of little use.

The driveway that he guarded
was dirt and deeply sloped,
and halfway down it gently curved
around a massive oak.

Now some might think that he'd be bored,
stuck there night and day,
but he found entertainment
in the things that came his way.

He pondered long and hard on things
before making up his mind,
there was no hurry, he reasoned,
when all you have is time.

He carefully watched a nest of ants
both day and night for weeks,
before he reached the conclusion
that ants must never sleep.

He marveled at the seasons
and loved both sun and snow,
but sometimes he felt beaten down
when the wind-whipped rain would blow.

He loved the feel of bird feet
when they used him as a perch,
and when a truck would rumble by
he'd feel his spirit lurch.

He delighted in the field mice,
and wept with the mourning doves,
was suspicious of the furry raccoons,
with their masks and leather gloves.

Though days and months and years went by,
and he was oft ignored,
his life of perfect stillness
was itself a rich reward.

So as we hurtle past him,
with our tires spitting rocks,
perhaps we could learn something
from our stoic old mailbox.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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February 15, 2009 at 2:59 AM
Dear Danielle, I did receive your soup mail and have replied. I love this poem and will get your certificate out to you if you will please send me your mailing address again at the email address below. I don't know why I never received it and I apologize. Lainie
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August 15, 2008 at 11:17 PM
Dear Danielle, Your poem - The Mailbox - is a Brilliant example of a personification and has won an honorable mention in my contest. Please send your mailing address to: [email protected] so I may forward you a certificate of poetic excellence from MemorElaine Publishing House. Congratulations! Love and best wishes, Lainie
Winter Avatar
August 15, 2008 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations Danielle on your Honorable Mention in Elaine's Personification contest. Outstanding write. Love, Shar
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July 11, 2008 at 3:33 AM
Very good Danielle, I enjoyed reading you work. The Imagery was fantastic. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep writing, Best of wishes Dave
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July 9, 2008 at 5:02 AM
Danielle, congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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July 8, 2008 at 7:16 AM
You're quite the reminiscent story teller. I like that through it all...it stood. Excellent work. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. My best, Charlie
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July 8, 2008 at 5:16 AM
What a delightful poem, Danielle! I like the beginning stanzas describing the tattered but dignified mailbox and the last four stanzas. "...a life of perfect stillness..." is a mantra for us all. Well done!
Sheart Avatar
July 7, 2008 at 3:22 PM
Hi Danielle I really enjoyed this poem very much. I like your writing style. Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
Jordan Avatar
July 7, 2008 at 9:32 AM
this was a wonderful poem - excellent personification on something we all take for granted - congrats on the feature
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July 7, 2008 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on "The Mailbox" being featured. God Bless, D- (gotcha)- Danielle. Vince
Stere Avatar
July 7, 2008 at 6:13 AM
Congrad on being featured poem I loved it You really gave a lot of thought to it. keep writing you got talent!
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July 6, 2008 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations on having this very well written poem featured this week. What a joy to read. Well done. Regards Heidie
Winter Avatar
July 6, 2008 at 5:28 PM
Congratulations Danielle on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Well deserved. Love, Shar
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