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The Maiden of Carbury Hill

The Maiden of Carbury Hill
I remember a story told of a red-haired girl who never grew old,
who died when there came a great famine.
In one pale hand she owned a sheep's knucklebone,
the other a sprig of winter jasmine.
Though her kin all left for distant shores she still lies in repose,
near the ruins of Carbury castle in Ireland.
Irish lore has it written that the lass was once smitten,
with a young lad who went off to war and then died in.
Alas, it's been long that she's been dead and gone,
listen.., you can still hear her mournful tune.
She sings when gales blow near two barrows of old,
o'er the green heath nestled 'neath Carraigdhoun.
Crestfallen, he sails through still waters where dwells, Kilcullen's lost daughters,
well preserved in the dark peat bog of Carbury.
Be careful where your feet fall lest you join them in the deep halls,
where the lost maidens of Own na Buidhe lie buried.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/11/2021 5:29:00 PM
I really like this. It put me in the mood of Wuthering Heights, a tragic story I love. I found an older one of yours I've not seen yet. yayyyy
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Date: 2/14/2021 7:38:00 PM
Andrea, Thank you for dropping by. Roots grow deep in some parts of the world. Though it may take a thousand years, we'll discover their meaning one day. -Richard
Date: 10/7/2019 3:21:00 PM
A deep, dark poem - folklore has always fascinated and intrigued generations as myth and beliefs are handed down by word of mouth - 'Irish lore has it written.........you can still hear her mournful tune' A like this poem very much indeed - you have got some 'Poe' talent in you - I hear it every midnight, whispered through the rustling leaves! My bit of dark. Well penned Richard, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/8/2019 12:24:00 AM
Jennifer, So nice to see your comment. I strive to find the light just on the edge of the shadows. But sometimes it just won't shine through. -Richard
Date: 6/22/2019 7:51:00 AM
Romanticism wrought with warning and all!
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Date: 6/22/2019 11:21:00 PM
Kim, Thanks for dropping by. I've spent a good part of the day reading about Catholic skirts, spiders on shoulders, sexy cathedrals, fluffy gingerbeast, sofa beds, and Totie. -Richard
Date: 5/11/2019 9:27:00 PM
A beautiful, atmospheric piece of Celtic twilight! Well done, Raven.
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Date: 6/22/2019 6:57:00 PM
Geoffrey, Thank you for the great comments. I enjoyed reading "The Bare Infinitive and the Meaning of Life". Looking for hidden meaning in prose and the allegorical phrase twist is the spice of life. -Richard
Date: 3/26/2019 12:46:00 AM
I can feel my Irish roots calling out to me. Nicely done.
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Date: 3/27/2019 10:19:00 PM
I wanted to channel ancestral voices I guess. Sheep's bones were used in children's games in earlier times. -Richard
Date: 3/15/2019 5:41:00 AM
Canterbury and Richard the Lionhearted, Launcelot, Galahad, Gawain, Gawith, etc. We were craving and raving to quoth the raven for behaving whose poems we are saving. How did you find me?
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Date: 3/17/2019 12:30:00 AM
Tom ain't too bad either (wink).
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Date: 3/15/2019 10:40:00 PM
Hello James, I really appreciate your comment. To answer your question: Finding you was quite easy. (Like finding a nuclear cloud in the Bikini Atolls in the 50's). Just look at anything that says Top 100 in PoetrySoup and you'll find James Horn like others here that I admire very much.
Date: 3/14/2019 9:48:00 PM
Richard, this is very intriguing. The YouTube performance complements the ballad. Nicely done. ~Mark
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Date: 3/14/2019 11:01:00 PM
Thank you for the comment Mark. She sings so beautifully..,I hoped it would resonate with a few. -Richard
Date: 3/10/2019 8:10:00 AM
I am part Irish, and I am thinking "Is this Irish or is this Scottish?" and what does it matter? It is a darling poem that made me smile. It reads like a well-thought-out faerie tale, my friend. Well done indeed.
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:11:00 PM
That is an apt observation. The Irish don't say lass as much as the Scots I've read. BTW, another name for Carbury Hill in County Kildare is "Sidh Neachtain" or "The Fairy Mound of Neachtain". There is also Carbury Bog only a couple kilometers away. This faerie tale is a real place in a different time with a little poetic license to thrill. -Richard
Date: 3/10/2019 8:00:00 AM
Great storytelling..
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:12:00 PM
Always a pleasure to hear from you Silent One. -Richard
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