The Magic Pen

the pen moves as I sleep
I barely see it scratching across the notebook
But I do not care; I am exhausted.
It is way past my bed time.
My muse kept me up.

I do not open my eyes
Knowing in the morning I will hate what I see
Because the pen is the smart one in this duo
It is despicably sad 
being shown up by a magic pen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/13/2020 6:33:00 PM
No, that is what is called, Automatic Writing and you are apparently channeling some fun poets in your sleep.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/14/2020 3:25:00 AM
I have no idea which ones, but they are busy.
Date: 8/12/2020 6:52:00 PM
Don't beat yourself up, my dear. After all, Pens is the Vice-President, isn't he?! ~ Kamala Hair-net
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/14/2020 3:26:00 AM
Don't remind me please! Oh, ugh!
Date: 8/12/2020 1:22:00 PM
A pen will always be a poet's friend.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/12/2020 6:18:00 PM
The magic pen seems to always be creating.
Date: 8/12/2020 1:00:00 PM
Adorable. A great write. A great pen :) Love and prayers and blessings
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/12/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Regina
Date: 8/12/2020 12:06:00 PM
Love this write. So Cute!!! Where do I get a pen like you have????? Maybe it can help me out....... Enjoy your day writing away.......
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/12/2020 6:19:00 PM
I have no idea how I found this pen.
Date: 8/12/2020 11:05:00 AM
Good one, Caren. Owl video at the bottom.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/12/2020 6:19:00 PM
Thank you Eve. I LOVE this video!
Date: 8/12/2020 11:04:00 AM
http://www.dailybest.it/wp-content/uploads/2015/09/21-owls-that-have-stolen-the-show-14-is-a-little-nugget20.gif.pagespeed.ce_.1_zrv54_5A.gif
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Date: 8/12/2020 8:49:00 AM
I think poetry is a bit of magic. And its writers quite extraordinary. Lovely work!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/12/2020 6:20:00 PM
Thank you Joe
Date: 8/12/2020 5:29:00 AM
You have a wonderful pen with golden ink dear Caren mam..it keeps you awake to leak your Muse.:-)Keep writing.Keep inspiring. Have a lovely day.Take care.~Deepa:-)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/12/2020 6:20:00 PM
Thank you V Deepa. I appreciate it.
Date: 8/12/2020 4:44:00 AM
Captured the emotion of a writer, wanting, needing to pen continuously, listening to her muse’s nonstop chatter, the pen wiggling like a heartbeat. Love this one...I feel it.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/12/2020 6:21:00 PM
Thank you Kim. I know you do!
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