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The Magic of the Oak -Part 2- Collaboration With Chris Green

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The Magic Of The Oak (Part 2 of 4) A Green and White Production The table was set And this you can bet A meal that was fit for a king They sat in their seats All eyeing the treats When one of them started to sing A feast for the ear I crept closer to hear but hummed just a little too loud That language unknown Such seductive tone They stopped and looked up, I ran out I tripped on the mat Fell on my face flat They chuckled, I wished I could hide Then helping me up One gave me a cup And said, “come, you’re welcome inside” They gave me a chair I didn't fit there And sat on the stone floor instead Then gobbled some soup They all yelled: "Woop-woop" And I ate a slice of rye bread While looking around Such magic was found This place seemed to go on for miles Enchanting indeed My face I did feed With food falling out of my smiles (to be continued...) *** July 11, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2017 9:14:00 PM

A Green and White Production, indeed, and awesome!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/14/2017 1:29:00 PM

Hi Darren , you and Chris penned a good continuation of the first write. But I must say I'm hungry all of a sudden. Off to read part three:-) Alexis

Darren White
Date: 7/14/2017 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Alexis, it was great fun!

Joseph May

Date: 7/13/2017 4:36:00 PM

With food falling out of my smiles"...love that line... Great job poets

Darren White
Date: 7/14/2017 2:06:00 AM

Isn't it wonderful? It's Chris' line and stanza :)

Dean Wood

Date: 7/13/2017 1:04:00 PM

I've been looking for this! Lots of fun!

Darren White
Date: 7/13/2017 2:18:00 PM

Thanks Dean, so glad you like this :)

Lenna Walker

Date: 7/13/2017 11:36:00 AM

TWO thumbs up for White and Green !!! Fun and whimsical read ! :)

Darren White
Date: 7/13/2017 12:20:00 PM

Thanks for the thumbs Lenna!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/13/2017 12:46:00 AM

Ha ha, love this part too, White and Green, hope this fairy tale continues to be positive and magical:) you both collaborate so well:)

Darren White
Date: 7/13/2017 12:20:00 PM

Happy you love this so much Jo, we do too :)

Sara Ella

Date: 7/12/2017 8:05:00 PM

This is fun! Read with a smile :D Great collaboration <3

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 11:43:00 PM

Two more story parts to come, stay tuned! ;)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/12/2017 9:42:00 AM

Kindness goes a long way...smile

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 9:49:00 AM

It does, and I smile :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/12/2017 9:27:00 AM

An enjoyable collaboration. Well done to the both of you. I look forward to more. I laughed at the great line , food falling out of my smiles :)

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 9:49:00 AM

yeah, that's a great line, I agree (ssshhhh, Chris wrote it)

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/12/2017 7:24:00 AM

Wonderful collaboration ... we too find magic and enjoy it ...

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 8:48:00 AM

I thank you so very much. Happy you like it :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/12/2017 6:00:00 AM

Oh good' alls well that ends well' I see 'With food falling out of your smiles', that is a good line. I'm glad to see that it was an enchanted type place that went on for miles. Extremely good Daren and Chris. Another great from the Green and White Productions...Looking forward to the next...Maria

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 8:47:00 AM

Tomorrow my friend, tomorrow :) I am happy your like our little colourful company.