The Magic of Garden Glen

Fireflies flicker and flutter beneath the dancing trees exotic breezes whisk and whisper through limbs and leaves The Golden Goddess of Garden Glen breaths evergreen Her elfish essence is magic and Her spirit gleens for it's merely a moment at the wonder She whiles She wiggles and giggles and then She snickers and smiles. She's not really a Goddess nor is She a Princess She's more of a mystical, magical Enchantress She is The Garden's gleaming, glistening Governess a caldron song singer, a spell casting Sorceress She starts with Her essence then stirs Her spirit divine She drips dragon tears, then simmers slow with sweet sunshine. Simple solution of spellbound myth and mystery secretly sublime not found, hidden in history not mountain high, valley low nor places in between is the glowing gleen of The Garden Glen's evergreen it is just East of the sun and Southwest of the moon in a place where clouds and castles float and stars are strewn
entry date 7/26/2015 post date 7/05/2014
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A. Sharma Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 12:45 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win Warner! Lovely final lines!
Harding Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 4:59 PM
Cool rhyme scheme, Warner. Congrats on your win! xoxo
Carmack Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Impressive and I am glad you gave me the chance to read it.
A  Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 1:49 AM
Nice win... SKAT
Eastman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:37 AM
Loved the building imagery... You did a wonderful job here... Congratulations on the win.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:03 AM
Wonderful imagery Warner!Congrats on ur awesome win!
Baxter Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:12 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Sharma
A  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 4:26 PM
WARNER, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:56 PM
stunning imagery Warren congrats on placing hugs
Baxter Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:11 AM
Thank you Shadow it's Warner:)
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Duch wonderful imagery and alliteration - a delight to read Warner:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Baxter Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:09 AM
Thank you so much Jan
Sietesantos Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win! I wish I could get it all together so beautifully!
Baxter Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 1:30 PM
Thank you so much Pandita
Chutani Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 12:35 AM
Warner, a magical and beautiful write. Congrats for the win. Mohan
Baxter Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 12:53 AM
Thank you so much Mohan
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 9:01 PM
Congrats on a great win. This is amazing, Warner. Sorry about the 10 lines.. Hugs.. Arlene
Baxter Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 12:56 AM
Thank you so much Arlene. I tried to trim but just couldn't tell the story in 10
Roberts Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 7:24 PM
Congrats on a great write ....Seren
Baxter Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Thank you so much Seren
Gorelick Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:46 AM
Whew! well done, darn the 10 line limit..this is spectacular. BG
Baxter Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Thank you for your kind words BG. I tried but just couldn't remove a single word.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:43 AM
Stunning spectacular write! Congratulations.
Baxter Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:55 PM
Thank you so much Richard, I am glad you liked it.
Mehta Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 5:35 AM
The poem would have been placed higher but exceeded the limit of ten lines, Warner. Congrats on the win
Baxter Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:54 PM
Thank you Dr. I tried to reduce it but I just couldn't take anything away and still say what I wanted to say. THX again for the award. W.
Sietesantos Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Warner, this is so lovely and so beautifully poetically-penned that it is certainly a winner in my eyes!
Baxter Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Thank you so much Pandita, I am glad you enjoyed it
Gorelick Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Not only alliteration, but great rhymes too. This is sure to be a winner. BG
Baxter Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 6:38 PM
Thank you so much BG, I am glad you enjoyed it. I did however exceed the line limit, so...
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