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The Magic Carnival Ride

We all sleep as worlds collide Caught up in elusive dreams Lost on this carnival ride Where nothing is as it seems Now you see it, now you don't Just like a mad magician Some that will and some that won't Swallow this sad tradition They dangle carrots in our face The riches that they'll bequeath us Then they'll play their hidden ace And pull the rug from beneath us When we find it was all for naught And we lie face down on the ground Still another ticket's bought As this ride goes round and round

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Date: 2/2/2024 12:25:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Randy Freie
Date: 2/2/2024 12:35:00 AM
Thanks Jeanette, I really appreciate the feedback.
Date: 2/1/2024 5:19:00 PM
Wow Randy, what a great metaphorical poem! Enjoyed the read; it makes perfect sense.
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Randy Freie
Date: 2/1/2024 5:26:00 PM
Ah yes, life in this material world. The height of civilization and the epitaph of humanity. Thanks again for your feedback David.

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