The Maddened Poet

"Young in years and old in hours," 
Pressed to pen poetic powers. 
Though often lacking what I need, 
To reap the rarely ripened read. 

The rhythm falters far too fast, 
The rhymes are vain and veer so vast. 
That all is lost and left to lie. 
Prevailing poets pass me by. 

I twist, I turn, I toss all night. 
My wrist, it burns, from all I write. 
My quest to quill the very best, 
And place asunder all the rest. 

I hardly ever hit the mark, 
Unleashing arrows in the dark. 
With poisoned tips they pierce my soul, 
But missing my initial goal. 

The human heart, my target set, 
I've failed, but haven't finished yet. 
My words of wisdom will ignite. 
With poisoned arrow's final flight. 

For now, I'll rest my weary eyes, 
Await my fated forced demise. 
And fiercely face this fight within, 
Till the maddened poet strikes again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations on going on into the second round..Sara
Brown Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Timothy. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Knight Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 5:49 PM
*snap snap snap* I enjoyed that. keep up the good work Tim
Sapp Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Well done! I enjoyed and empathized with every line!
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September 9, 2010 at 8:20 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Timothy , I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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September 8, 2010 at 2:25 PM
OMG this was such a great and heartfelt read.Congrats on being featured today.Wonderful write.Teresa
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September 8, 2010 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your featured write. Enjoyed the read. God Bless Phyl
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Timothy. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 9:06 PM
I doubt there is a single poet that could not appreciate this piece. Congrats on the well-deserved feature spot, and good luck on your continued quest.
Riley Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 11:41 AM
I think all writters would relate to this one. Great imagery and flow , a pleasure to read. A true talent with the words, thanks for sharring. Judy Riley
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:51 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Timothy. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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May 17, 2010 at 5:51 PM
great write, enjoyed!!
Budd Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 4:15 PM
Madness seems to be the root of some amazing things! I love this. Beautiful write. I enjoyed it from start to end.
Green Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Excellent! I think the maddened poet is up to something right now!
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