The Lucid Friend

"Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave 
Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; " 
Edna St, Vincent Millay


I cascade with mystique to dark -a b y s s. Frames of my life fade, as my ashes -d i s s o l v e. At the end of this -t u n n e l- awaits a -l u c i d- friend in hood, all pain vanishes at the -s u m m i t; on mama's lap i doze to -a f t e r l i f e.
May 20, 2020 Etheree Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance(Dear Heart) Theme: Death Winner: Third Place
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Date: 5/28/2020 10:48:00 AM
Aditi, very nice and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/28/2020 11:32:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Constance and for my placement in your contest :)
Date: 5/25/2020 4:49:00 PM
Very striking imagery, congratulations on your win in the contest-
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/26/2020 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind encouragement Michelle :)
Date: 5/25/2020 4:26:00 PM
I like the theme and content of this Etheree, Aditi. Also worthy of note are the smooth flowing lines. The end line is superb! ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/27/2020 1:13:00 AM
I am blessed by your uplifting words Paul. God bless you. Thank you for your appreciation :)
Date: 5/25/2020 2:58:00 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your placement. An etheree poem written with exquisite imagery. ~ Sonia
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Date: 5/25/2020 3:14:00 PM
Thank you for appreciating Sonia :)
Date: 5/25/2020 10:55:00 AM
Congrats Aditi!Well deserved!
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Date: 5/25/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for encouraging me Krish :)
Date: 5/25/2020 10:23:00 AM
Congrats Aditi.. Great win..
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Date: 5/25/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Jenish :)
Date: 5/24/2020 8:55:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Aditi. It did my heart good to see this on the winners' list.
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Date: 5/25/2020 2:45:00 PM
I am always blessed when I read your words of encouragement dear friend. Thank you. God bless you! :)
Date: 5/24/2020 5:31:00 PM
A nice flow of words. I really love the last line. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 5/25/2020 2:44:00 PM
Glad you loved it Jeanne. Thank you for appreciating :)
Date: 5/23/2020 6:45:00 PM
Such a beautiful, descriptive poem, Aditi! Janice
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Date: 5/23/2020 7:41:00 PM
Thank you for appreciating Janice :)
Date: 5/22/2020 2:36:00 AM
A perfect Etheree, with a perfect triangle shape and great passage from life to after life with the comfort of mother! Wonderful! Best of luck for the competition!
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Date: 5/22/2020 2:37:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Krish! Glad you loved it :)
Date: 5/20/2020 6:28:00 PM
I am loving these ones on death. THIS IS GREAT!
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Date: 5/20/2020 11:21:00 PM
Glad you liked it Andrea. Thanks for your kind words of appreciation. :)
Date: 5/20/2020 1:53:00 PM
Wonderful musings on the path to the afterlife, Aditi. I love the mother's lap as a symbol of comfort and peace, and (my interpretation...) new birth into the next life. Just lovely in all aspects. Good luck in the contest, and I hope you write more etherees! God bless you ~ John
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Date: 5/20/2020 1:56:00 PM
I choose to believe that the peace after death will be as beautiful as mother's lap when I start my journey into the next life. Thank you for the wonderful insight from your interpretation into my words. Always a source of inspiration and knowledge dear friend. I will try to write more. :)
Date: 5/20/2020 8:56:00 AM
Oh I like that! And love a Millay poem I've not yet read! Thank you! Good luck in the contest Aditi, ~ xo mo
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Date: 5/20/2020 9:00:00 AM
Glad you loved it Mo. Thank you for appreciating it. God bless you :)
Date: 5/20/2020 8:11:00 AM
Wow! This is a wonderful write! Love the quote too! All end up in the grave. My mom’s lap used to be solace for those unspoken childhood thoughts.
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Date: 5/20/2020 8:15:00 AM
In the end, I guess we all miss our mother's love. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Kim :)
Date: 5/20/2020 6:57:00 AM
Such a wonderful write. I enjoyed it and wish you all the best. Love to you and God bless you always, Gina
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:04:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it Gina. Thank you for all your love and blessings. Stay blessed :)
Date: 5/20/2020 6:42:00 AM
AWESSOME! GREAT EXAMPLE OF AN ETHEREE! ~ Elaine
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation Elaine :)
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