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The Lovely Banquet

I went to a lovely banquet, everything prepared was so pleasing to the eye. I saw things that I had never seen before. Some dishes appeared unusual and out of place. Others looked rare and exotic; I didn't know whether to eat or stare. In the end, I chose to indulge myself in a once in a lifetime feast. But as I began to eat the different things on the menu, My palette and taste buds shocked and deceived me. The things that appeared rare and exotic were bland and flavorless. And things that seemed rare and unusual, and just plain odd, Had finesse and flavor throughout its core and danced on my tongue. It was the best things I ever tasted; if I went by their appearance alone, I wouldn't have given them a second thought. Alexis Y. 04/6/2021

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Date: 4/9/2021 12:27:00 PM
What a different creative write this is Alexis my friend things, people, food, all sometimes seem exotic and exciting but like you I prefer the plainer down to earth choice - far more palatable. Hugs and kisses from across the pond. Jennifer.
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Date: 4/7/2021 8:18:00 AM
I worked as a dealer in Atlantic City for fourteen years. The hotels there are known for hosting great dinners and banquets. Usually on Saturday and Sunday nights, they offered the leftover food like steaks and seafood to the employees. Your poem reminded me of that.
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:17:00 PM
Oh the proof is in the eating. The poetry of yours, never fails to enlighten my taste buds, when of such effervescence.
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Date: 4/6/2021 8:20:00 PM
Alexis, your beautifully written poem is so wise and wonderful, with life lessons to be learned. Best of wishes, Evelyn :D
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Date: 4/6/2021 7:21:00 PM
That's usually the way it is throughout life. What appears the flashiest isn't really as good as it looks and that which seems ordinary is usually really great. Kind-a think God is telling us something here. Nice write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/6/2021 5:50:00 PM
As they always say, don't judge a book by its cover -- or food either. Interesting! :) gw
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Date: 4/6/2021 3:17:00 PM
Very interesting foodie's poem, Alexis. On my ONE cruise I got to take (are THOSE ever coming back), they could make food look SO wonderful, and truly it tasted wonderful, but so too do mac and cheese and ordinary casserole dishes!
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Date: 4/6/2021 2:55:00 PM
Taste test is not always possible but if something doesn’t look appealing I will pass. It’d be rude to take a sniff test in public. Good write, Alexis.
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Date: 4/6/2021 1:35:00 PM
- I'm a bit picky when it comes to new foods ... but I have learned it is worth tasting :) - Smell, see and taste ... can be a pleasant surprise - Great poem, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2021 1:29:00 PM
They say you taste with your eyes first...many will have been through the same thing..this is well written..
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Date: 4/6/2021 1:00:00 PM
There is a message in the ending lines of your poem, Alexis. Well done my friend.
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Date: 4/6/2021 12:03:00 PM
There are a multitude of things I would never put in my mouth no matter who said it was manna from Heaven, but you are not one of them! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:33:00 AM
Oh so true Alexis, I've got to admit I've looked at things and thought i dont like the look of it, but once you've tasted a morsel then found it to be delicious!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/6/2021 11:18:00 AM
Hi Alexis, a very well-written poem; I enjoyed your description of how you can "taste the freedom of infinite possibilities in the initial gape of new dishes."Warm hugs Alexis and good luck
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