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The Love Symphony- Quatern

THE LOVE SYMPHONY- Quatern

Abab/caca/adad/eaeA

The symphony of love is in rehearse,
Come to me closely and hold my waist,
Let us not make this time to curse,
Tonight we'll lose our soul in haze.

Hold your breath while we go deep,
The symphony of love is in rehearse,
The moment we can't help to keep.
Perform it gently, care not to pierce.

The symphony of love is in rehearse,
Hear my moans break the silence.
In depth of the ocean, do immerse.
Let's hit the heaven's hidden surface.

Hold me close 'til we reach the edge.
While waiting for a sweet release,
A solemn love we will both pledge,
The symphony of love is in rehearse.



written:May 01,2014
Especially dedicated to Andrea Dietrich's
Do You Know Quatern Poetry Contest

Copyright © Aiyah Torres | Year Posted 2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/5/2014 10:31:00 AM Wow owls!! Love this sweet romantic symphony singing on my eyes and thoughts..:) God bless us always... Olive eloisa hugs much..:) Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/5/2014 10:48:00 AM hey gurl... aaaahhh... you're so sweet!!! :O)) tysm!!!! I hope mangyare na ang kitakitz natin so we can sing altogether 'til the break of dawn!!! ..haha... labyaH!!! ^__^

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/5/2014 10:23:00 AM ohh wow.. i am awed by this beauty, aiyah!,, panalo.. huggs! Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/5/2014 10:45:00 AM OMG, nette... !!!! this is amazing... I didn't expect that my poem will amaze my poet highness... Thank you so much!!! .../;O)) my pleasure to have your comment.... I'm so happeeee!!!! .. :O))

Jack Ellison Date: 5/5/2014 6:24:00 AM This is absolutely beyond beautiful my sweet friend! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/5/2014 7:21:00 AM Oooh... my ever sweetest and beloved, Jack.. Thanks for this wonderful comment!! oxox... :O))

Jake Ponce Date: 5/4/2014 5:36:00 AM It's like an unending waltz. thumbs up! Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/5/2014 7:20:00 AM whew!!! ...thanks JakE!!! oxox

Justin Bordner Date: 5/4/2014 2:11:00 AM "Hold me close 'til we reach the edge..." The best note of the symphony. Extremes feed most. J.A.B. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/5/2014 7:19:00 AM hi JUSTIN!! .. tHANK you so much for a visit and comment on my poem... this is much appreciated!!! :O)) oxox

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/2/2014 8:46:00 AM Practice does indeed make perfect. No music is more beautiful than the moaning of a woman in the heat of passion. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/5/2014 7:13:00 AM Sorry for the late reply.. :O) Thank you ,Rick for such a rewarding comment you left on my poem!! ..:)0 oxox

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/2/2014 7:23:00 AM Very passionate work. Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/4/2014 4:51:00 AM Thank yo so much,Sara :O))

Deborah Shiells Date: 5/1/2014 5:45:00 PM Hi Aiyah, This was very elegant. Great write as always:~) Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us here. Peace, Deborah Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/2/2014 7:17:00 AM Oh Deborah... you are so kind and sweet my dear friend!! :O)) Thanks for a wonderful comment!~~ ^__^OXOX

Tim Smith Date: 5/1/2014 4:57:00 PM So romantic. You did great...I tried one but couldn't finish it just wasn't right...hugs Tim Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/2/2014 7:15:00 AM Hey Tim!! .. please finish your poem... I'm sure that'll be so lovely!! .. Thank you for commenting on my poem ..OXOX!! ^__^

Paul Callus Date: 5/1/2014 4:56:00 PM Lovely sensual symphony AiyaH. Quite an able performance!! // paul Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/2/2014 7:12:00 AM Hey there ,Paul... Wazz up?!.. Oh my.. thank you for always leaving me smile.. I appreciate your kind comment all the time!!! .. :O))

Ken Carroll Date: 5/1/2014 1:47:00 PM Lovely poesia romantica! Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/2/2014 7:11:00 AM WOw!! Thanks Ken for a great reward on my poem!! ..:O)) Your visit and comment is much appreciated.. :O)) hugs...

Eileen Manassian Date: 5/1/2014 1:38:00 PM This is sensual and sweet, my dear. :) My kind of poetry. This is a difficult form. I haven't tried it. I've been busy lately. You haven't been by to visit. Hope all is well! Hugs Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 5/1/2014 1:44:00 PM you know what's the truth is... I am hesitate sometimes to leave a comment, I drop by and read... but your poem is so awesome that my comment may not be fitted.. hehe... Thanks again!! :O)) Aiyah Torres Date: 5/1/2014 1:43:00 PM Hi Sweet Eilee... aaahhh.. thank you dear!! ..yes this is kinda hard,, hehe,,, hope I made it right!! lol... Sorry if I can't visit your garden so often.. i just have limited time.. ^_^ OXOX..