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The Lost Smile

One piece is broken and lost Now I'm paying the cost It's a very high price to pay For letting it slip away It happened so innocently I was cutting so carefully Cutting the ties that bind Encased in a thicket of lies While I cut away to the truth The last one was hanging loose Then a final slash with the knife Suddenly changed my life I didn't notice at first Freedom had numbed the hurt But after a little while I realized I'd lost my smile I decided to look in the past That's where I saw it last But had waited a little too long The past was already gone So I looked around in the present Trying to find my lost face crescent But had no luck with that All I found was an old dirty hat But thinking I could fake it Well, that just didn't make it Just one close look in my eyes It was obviously a disguise The future is so uncertain I know it's lost and hurtin' Perchance if it comes your way Please pick it up and put it on display Cause if I ever see that smile I'll know my time spent worthwhile Since I can't find it, you see Then maybe it will happily find me an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Date: 7/12/2017 6:20:00 PM
It's a great poem, but it's been a while; I hope some of it returned. Here's a tip: Peter Duggan's poems are effective for me. I have a different issue with smile. My mouth forms a natural frown, and I look unhappy even when I'm happy.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/12/2017 6:25:00 PM
I'd gamble that you have a lovely smile, Hannah. A reflection of the one on your heart:) Thank you for the read and the comments. Peter is a wonderful poet and a wonderful friend:)
Date: 2/19/2016 4:06:00 PM
Your smile is still inside my friend.. Let a fountain of smiles flow from your pen.love this heartfelt piece... Hugs.. Arlene
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/21/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thank you,Arlene for the visit and your kind words. I'm a lot like a woman. I get up every morning and go to the mirror and put on my smile to wear all day. I still haven't found the lost one yet.
Date: 2/18/2016 9:25:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thank you, Funom. I am grateful for you taking your time to read and comment . I appreciate your support and encouraging remarks Peace and God Bless:)
Date: 2/16/2016 7:24:00 PM
I can not only make you smile, but LOL! So perhaps you might find it with me? Why don't you let me make you tea?
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/17/2016 4:17:00 AM
Are you joking? I'm Irish for God's sake!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 7:44:00 PM
I don't drink tea. Do you?
Date: 2/16/2016 6:40:00 PM
i enjoyed your poem, daniel, and hope all these comments help you find that lost smile...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene. Just seeing your smile in your photo makes me smile:) I appreciate you reading and commenting,
Date: 2/16/2016 3:48:00 PM
Excellent Daniel. like the use of "my lost face crescent". Cheer up you'll find it or vice-versa. I had the fake one for a few years but the real one is back and I couldn't be happier. Well maybe a little happier : ))
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thanks time, I believe you've already found it. I really appreciate your support and time. Peace:)
Date: 2/16/2016 3:43:00 PM
Hang in there Daniel, many supporters here in the soup to help you find that smile!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 4:28:00 PM
Thank you, dear Jeannie. Just seeing your smiling photo, I think I've already found it.
Date: 2/16/2016 3:34:00 PM
7+ I am faving it and sharing it! Daniel, you have created an absolutely, genuine, gem. I love the imagery and cerebral impressions:) You done good "dog"...peace, jill
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 4:26:00 PM
Thank you, Jill. I appreciate the beyond 7, the fav and especially your time and considerate comments. Peace.

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