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The Lost Fisher Boy

Playing at night on rocky ground, he sprained his foot.
He hobbled onwards careful where his foot he put.
The lonely shepherds had long returned to their sheep,
But he wanted to see before he went to sleep.
Shepherds said that angels sent them to the stable,
So he wanted to see all was not a fable.

The night was cold but he did not really mind,
What worried him was if he would manage to find,
The new born babe that promised peace and love to all,
So he entered quietly in the forlorn stall.

There in the half dark, dimly lit by an old oil lamp
Tiptoeing softly inside like some escaped tramp,
He saw two persons asleep, but in a cradle
He saw the sweetest babe: he felt so disabled.
The dim dark turned bright and sweet angelic voices
Turned the cold places in feelings of rejoices.

Afraid the lonely boy would not approach too near,
This king of king, was no fable and he felt fear.
The kindly woman woke and beckoned him to see,
Do not be afraid, come hither she said, It's He.

The boy hobbled slowly to the heavenly child,
Instinctively he kissed the new born babe who smiled.
One day I shall see this babe though I live so far
I'll know him for only he could possess the star.
I shall be a great fisherman and so I’ll know,
My name is John and with Him I shall always go.


27/12/2012

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Nativity New Poems
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
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Horsman Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 6:04 PM
Trawling through your poems, Victor, and found this gem i had not read before, have now, and agree with all the comments and the POTD, Yes wonderful poetry...
Cholt Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on POTD. A very nice retelling of the Biblical story.
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 7:34 AM
- Congratulations on your top win, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 20, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Victor, I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful nativity story! I love the ending where the fisher boy turns out to be a future disciple. Very creative! Congrats on your first place win! Blessings, Kim M
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:36 AM
How great that this wonderful poem won first place Victor. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
George Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 9:30 PM
Back to your great poem with congratulations on your wonderful win . So happy for you dear friend !
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. A wonderful story/write and picture. Have a blessed day........................
Alex Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 8:30 PM
Vow. A great connection with nativity and John. Beautiful work. Congratulations!
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January 18, 2022 at 7:51 PM
Congratulations on your top win in Eve’s contest!
Roper Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Victor, a beautiful story. You wrote what I was looking for. Not a summary, but a different point of view. Thank you and congratulations on your win. Bless you with a new year with lots of blessings.
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January 18, 2022 at 1:39 PM
Oh oh oh. a fave for sure!! I absolutely LOVE this! Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:00 AM
A very beautiful story that is deserving of your honor of POTD Victor. Belated Congratulations! New year Blessings xxoo
Tor Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 5:10 PM
Love the ending Victor. Loved this poem from you... God bless you for this effort....
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December 30, 2021 at 2:41 AM
You allow your avid reader to know and learn while enjoying the magic of a well crafted poetry! You amaze as the level of beauty you raise! Congratulations on your POTD honour, Victor! You earn all the recognition and standing ovation! My deepest regards and blessings.
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December 30, 2021 at 3:42 AM
And blessings to you too. May you be healthy for the Next Year. Your comment is always appreciated.
Nicole Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 7:43 PM
It's wonderful knowing that sheep are kept warm in the winter, instead of lingering in a field. Yes, John became a disciple. My heart smiles knowing this truth. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
Nicole Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Awe, thank you Victor. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Buhagiar Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 3:41 AM
A comment from you is highly appreciated. Hugs, Victor
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December 29, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on POTD Victor, enjoyed!
Baker Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Victor. Great poem about cousins, Jesus and John. Well written and enjoyable story / poem to read. Bless you, Bill
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 4:25 PM
Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor....Blessings ~ Debra
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December 29, 2021 at 11:35 AM
So cool how you got John into the nativity scene. Awesome, Victor!!
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December 29, 2021 at 11:02 AM
WoW! Victor, I enjoyed your story about the Lord’s birth. It was so well written and apt for the holiday season. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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December 29, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Victor, this is so beautiful I felt like weeping, what a great writer you are ! And congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 9:42 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Alex Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Wonderfully great writing. You are expert in it. I love reading your works. Congratulations!
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December 29, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Sending so many congratulations for this wonderful POTD Victor ~ so very well deserved of this honour... kindest thoughts Ann xx
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December 29, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Wow Victor this is a grand story you have beautifully created. Would love to see this published for a Christmas Story. I am so moved by your powerful message. Blessings, Paulette
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