The Lost Coin - Unfinished
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[This poem shows promise, but it is unfinished. So, it will be a collaboration. Anyone who wishes to do so is invited to write a suitable ending...preferably adding five (5) lines to the last stanza, or adding five lines and a three-line last stanza, bringing the story to a warm, satisfying conclusion. The rhyme and rhythm should follow the second stanza. Send your ending to my Soup Mail, and I will add the best ending to the poem. If you have any questions, Soup Mail me. Thanks!]
The coin lay flat unnoticed atop a garden ledge
With weathering its shiny silver became a rustic gray
Erosion with time eventually it lost its beveled edge.
Years ago, a fair-haired tot searched for his lost dime
Even shedding tears when his coin he could not find
He searched everywhere, then looked another time
Not remembering he had examined it while playing
In the garden as he skipped across the field stones tall
When he had grown tired, he had wound up laying,
Looking at the clouds from atop the garden wall.
As years passed, the garden neglected, the wall stayed
And a middle-aged man remembered there was a ledge
In the garden, where he had, as a small boy, often played.
So, he went back to visit the old homeplace to recapture
Memories of the happy times he had experienced there
Copyright © L Milton Hankins | Year Posted 2021
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