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The Lords Prayer

Our father who art in heaven

Forgetting the son and his holy sacrament
Wandering in a maze, looking for atonement
Disavowing God, we bow to evil temptations
God is growing weary of his sinful creation

Hallowed be thy name

We constantly profane the Kings monicker 
Rebuking displays regarding the creator
Disbelieving in the immaculate conception
God is growing weary of his sinful creation

Thy kingdom come thy will be done

Freewill creatures ignoring the warnings
Hastily striding toward the end of mornings
He has set the time for earth’s annihilation
God is growing weary of his sinful creation

On earth as it is in heaven

Adam and Eve the first created beings
Creation immoral from the very beginning
Inviting sin into their perfect habitation
God is growing weary of his sinful creation

Give us this day our daily bread

Refusing to eat from the table of life 
Dining on lies, as we wallow in strife
Children dying from spiritual malnutrition
God is growing weary of his sinful creation

Forgive us our debts as we forgive our debtors

The world was cleansed by the great flood
Human’s given hope, by a sacrifice of blood
Unable to forgive we await a fiery termination
God is growing weary of his sinful creation

Lead us not into temptation but deliver us from evil

Willing walking the path of unrighteousness
Passing the point where we can seek forgiveness
Time has run out for this sinful congregation
The son has returned destroying creation

For thine is the kingdom, the power, and the glory forever amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/3/2010 6:55:00 AM
awesome and articulate use of scripture...a true inspiration
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Date: 5/14/2010 5:10:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful and ingenious! I couldn't have said it better myself, actually I may have because I believe that my ideas and wisdom flow straight from God, so that 'I' in me then is really God, and I think that the inspiration for this work is that same 'I' in you! I have spiritual works that I was timid to post because I was ridiculed for it at Lulu's where they eventually drove me away. Thanks for reminding me who I am.
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:50:00 PM
Hi Anthony--your insights are definitely spot on--it really is so sad what we've become...a very timely reminder about that we must start to mend our ways--thanks so much for sharing this prayer with us...
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:16:00 AM
Hi Anthony - Great poem. Being a pastor for 30 years I can say this poem preaches a stirring message. Thank you for the kind remarks on my poem "Happiness"
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:00:00 AM
You have given us all a lot to ponder. Sometimes it seems that the whole world is evil. Thank you for reading my posting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/27/2010 6:35:00 PM
This is by far the best Prayer ever. Amen . Love the whole concept in this one.
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Date: 3/26/2010 1:42:00 AM
Nice commentary John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:18:00 AM
thanks for comment very serious warning here to great write when fishing I try to use different baits
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Date: 3/16/2010 9:42:00 AM
So much truth in this write Anthony, Things really need to change...Well done..God Bless...Taz
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Date: 3/3/2010 7:49:00 AM
very well written though amnot religious yet more or more into spiritual..... its a great emotion raw which the kind of poem i like .......
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Date: 3/3/2010 3:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem Anthony, to praise God is wonderful. I just wrote a poem of praise yesterday entitled Morning Horizons. I thank God for blessing me with the most beautiful mornings I could wish for, a poets dream!
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Date: 2/27/2010 2:22:00 PM
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Date: 2/26/2010 2:20:00 PM
Thank you for reading my latest poem and your comment. Enjoyed reading yours today. I say the Lord's Prayer, a bit differently with trespasses, several times a day and pray my sins will be forgiven. Not exactly sure what they have been, but I'm sure I'm no different than the rest of us at times. Very creative way to include my favorite prayer. Ellen
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Date: 2/26/2010 8:00:00 AM
Like the commentary Anthony.Nice thoughtful twist.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/25/2010 7:44:00 PM
Anthony, I am speechless! This is a masterpiece that needs to be read and digested by all. Thank you for the soup mail. When you have time read about my tragedy in, "If I could Talk To God Today". Peace, Audrey Soup sometimes doesn't work Lol
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Date: 2/24/2010 11:07:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Anthony. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 4:12:00 AM
Interesting write interspersed with "The Lord's Prayer" or example of a prayer teaching us how to pray. Keep the creative pen flowing with testimonies of your faith. Sara
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Date: 2/23/2010 7:00:00 PM
A Most Wonderful and Inspirational Write Anthony.. awesome and tremendous..powerful and breathtaking .. God bless u for sharing this immense poetry tonight... glory to God... thankxxx.. I just posted a new blog tonight on poetry..if u would care to comment ..would appreciate your input.. thankxx blessing with luv..Linda-Marie..
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