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They have the look of lovers- It is the tenderness of his tone when he tells of her It is his fingertips trailing the curve of her bare shoulder And lingering along her arm and The small of her back- It is in the rush of color to her cheeks, the blush And twist of her lips, the roll and thrust of her hips when She knows he is there- It is the ripple and toss Of her hair, it is the loss Of his breath in her sighs It is the touching of their eyes- It is the sibylline heat Of the words they don't speak It is the rough of his hands claiming her skin It is the line of her neck, the lift of her chin It is his obsession to say her name again And again, and again-

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Date: 11/29/2018 3:40:00 AM
Very nicely done, Michelle - hearty congratulations on your win in Lewis' contest - blessings and good day to you, Friend! :-) <3
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/29/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, friend - blessings to you, also!
Date: 11/26/2018 11:08:00 PM
Nicely done, Michelle,congratulations on your win.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/29/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, appreciate it!
Date: 11/26/2018 1:52:00 PM
Congrats Michelle, very sensual. :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/26/2018 2:19:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Gary!
Date: 11/26/2018 12:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/26/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thanks, appreciate it!
Date: 11/25/2018 11:27:00 PM
Well penned, Michelle. Hot stuff.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/26/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thanks, Line, glad you like it!
Date: 5/2/2018 11:13:00 PM
Richly-deserved win, Michelle. Your words are, indeed, 'pure poetry:' Image-laden, sensual, moving, everlasting. Another FAVE for me! :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/4/2018 3:31:00 PM
Again so flattered, that means a lot!
Date: 4/28/2018 6:35:00 AM
:) What Nina said the 1st time... lol. Congratulations on your win. This is a sensual well-written poem.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/29/2018 8:15:00 AM
Appreciate your comments, Susan, thank you!
Date: 4/28/2018 12:09:00 AM
Lovely poem, Michelle. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/29/2018 8:14:00 AM
So glad you liked it, Line!

Book: Shattered Sighs