The Longing

There is always 
a dull longing
that goes unlabelled
and hangs a layer or two
below a joy, a pang
somewhere in the soul
that can't be coughed up
or cut out, just endured.

A nonsense to the skeptic,
no more than perhaps
a twitch of an evolutionary
relic left unemployed within
the brain, now ossified
into an irritant jumping
across the boundaries
of our troubled sleep.

Whatever its origin,
it's always there
be it a hollow left in our psyche 
from an umbilical when severed 
by God or a buffering problem
in our brain,
the longing never leaves.
We try and quench it
with beauty, love, art
and myth but it remains
unfulfilled, as if a speck
of the infinite resides within
us all, that can absorb 
everything we have 
and then ask for more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/13/2023 11:34:00 PM
Wow. This hurts it's so good. Paul hats off to you.. you really hit the mark with this one. Echoes of the words of Morpheus. Definitely a favourite.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/14/2023 2:57:00 PM
I can recall reading some of John O'Donahue's work some time ago. On your recomendation will revisit, particularly the title mentioned. Many thanks Christopher, enjoy exploration into such matters. Regards
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 5/14/2023 6:33:00 AM
There is an Irish poet called John O'Donahue who has written extensively about human longing, I commend his work to you. Especially the book I am currently enjoying: 'Eternal Echoes: Exploring Our Hunger To Belong' (it's a tenner from Amazon.. in the UK at least) ;-)
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 5/14/2023 6:27:00 AM
Definitely a good, deep centred hurt, Paul!
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/14/2023 2:09:00 AM
Hopefully a pleasant hurt, Christopher. Very much appreciate your encouraging words and learning another fellow traveller recognises the condition. Thankyou, regards, Paul
Date: 5/12/2023 1:46:00 PM
I think it's what every human desires, to be loved and wanted. you are correct that it is always there, even when we get what we desire. No such thing as enough. Great writing as usual, Paul. Have a great weekend my friend.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/12/2023 7:28:00 PM
Again, your comments reflect real life Daniel. We never seem to be able to sit still long enough to enjoy our fill...off looking for something else. You too, enjoy your weekend...
Date: 5/12/2023 10:27:00 AM
Paul, how eloquently you describe a longing, a yearning that always seems to be held at bay. Never far from our thoughts, for a heart always wants what it wants. Therein lies the pain of unfulfillment.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/12/2023 7:21:00 PM
The human condition is such that it tries to grasp the infinite and therefore is in a constant state of flux. Thankyou Lin for your supportive comments....your wisdom dabs the words with a glow. Valued.
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