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The Longest Day

Today, they say’s, the longest day So stop to sniff the flowers, But what I need is not more daylight – I’d prefer more hours. I always have much more to do Than time in which to do it; With just another hour or two, I’m sure I’d zip right through it. Yet still, it’s nice to have more time To soak up all that sun; By tomorrow, in a teensy way, The shortening’s begun.

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Date: 6/23/2014 3:16:00 PM
To try and keep up with your pen. I'd have to resort to the power of ten. You seem to have more hours than I. Well, you know me, I will still try. :)
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Date: 6/21/2014 11:54:00 AM
I lene, yes i too note the longest day cos i am a teachr battling to try to inculcate a love of astron stuff into their heads but it's a losing battle against ipod and ipad games. You speak of a similar theme to mine inPASSAGE OF TIME, (on which yo u passed a nice comment for which I am pleased and grateful.) I have been absent fro m SOUP for about a year but am back now. It's a pleasure to see your work and your name again on my screen Ilene.......best regards....Syd
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Date: 6/21/2014 8:32:00 AM
How many times do we say there aren't enough hours in the day. Lovely write as ever. hugs Jan xx
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