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The Long Wait

It was such a rare anticipation, and all her friends were going. Mama finally gave permission for exciting midnight showing. She said she’d purchase tickets for the two of them to go. “There’s no way you’ll go alone to any midnight picture show.” The wait had been tremendous, but now the time is here. They are seated in selected seats when awaited scenes appear. She doesn’t see the side door opening, she wants to capture every word. For her the waiting is all over when the first loud shots are heard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/2/2012 12:20:00 AM
joyce... Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's waiting contest... what a WAIT..lol ;-) ~xox PD
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Date: 8/1/2012 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wait" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2012 11:34:00 AM
((()))Congrats on your winning timely work..That was a sad happening..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2012 9:00:00 AM
congrats Joyce on a brilliant write and win .. a superb entry.. sorry for late reply.. my hands swollen with rhumatoid arthritis right now.. painful and sore too..oh..
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Date: 7/31/2012 7:29:00 AM
love how you interpreted the theme, joyce... my super cheers or your stunning win!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/31/2012 1:18:00 AM
Oh this is too sad, congratulations Joyce xx
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Date: 7/30/2012 11:56:00 PM
Lovely poem Joyce...congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/30/2012 5:21:00 PM
I knew I'd see this one on the winner's list. Congrats on your well deserved win, Joyce! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/30/2012 4:05:00 PM
Congrats Friend!!!!
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Date: 7/30/2012 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joyce, this is very well done and I enjoyed reading it very much. As Always, Shar
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Date: 7/30/2012 2:34:00 PM
Joyce congrats on your win, a dreadful time for all..David
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Date: 7/21/2012 1:41:00 PM
A tragic event has occurred. I'm sure many of those young, innocent souls never knew what was coming. Terribly sad. I can no longer watch the tv coverage. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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