THE LONG GOODBYE - POTD


They sit in silence at the table
Eating their evening meal
He gently wipes the food from her face
This life they now live still feels so surreal

She now sits in her recliner chair
While he makes her a cup of tea
Emotionless and still
She stares blankly at the T.V

He closes his weary eyes and remembers
The who she used to be
Her sweetness, her laughter
And a life together fulfilled and happy

Asleep now in her chair
He reflects on where she has gone
Alone and confused in her own mind
He has missed her for so long

He helps her put on her nightie
Gets her tucked into bed
His kisses her and voices “l love you my sweet”
As he gently strokes her head

She takes his hand and  squeezes it softly 
As a lone tear rolls down her cheek
He smiles ,cuddles and reassures her
Lovingly whispers  “Oh there you are my sweet”!
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Date: 1/18/2024 10:28:00 AM
Deb, your poem is an emotionally resonant depiction of love that triumphs over the difficulties associated with dementia. The candid instances that you have documented evoke profound sentiments of kindness and introspection. Congrats on a well-deserved POTD
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Date: 1/18/2024 10:45:00 AM
Thankyou Lasaad! Debx
Date: 1/18/2024 1:47:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on receiving the honour of POTD, beautiful Deb.. (Sorry, I'm a lil late in wishing).. This poem really was so deserving and it touched my heart..
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Date: 1/18/2024 9:02:00 AM
Thankyou gorgeous girl….Debx
Date: 1/17/2024 11:04:00 PM
I see as well that it’s POTD. Big congratulations.
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Date: 1/18/2024 1:24:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Debx
Date: 1/17/2024 11:03:00 PM
This is beyond moving. A masterpiece. Some people will write a lifetime and not write something as special as this piece.
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Date: 1/18/2024 1:24:00 AM
Wow…..Richard what can l say to a comment as complimentary as what you have written! Honestly, l am blown away….thankyou so much….you have made my day and perhaps my poetry lifetime!! Debx
Date: 1/17/2024 5:23:00 AM
This is a hard thing for everyone who has to go through it. It is hard for the person who has dementia (in the early stages), and it is hard for those who are closest to them. You have described it as if you know it very well. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/18/2024 1:25:00 AM
Thankyou so much Sara…..appreciate your kind words! Debx
Date: 1/15/2024 4:33:00 PM
Deb M, your poem is a heart-wrenching portrayal of love enduring through the challenges of dementia. The tender moments you've captured resonate deeply, evoking empathy and reflection. Your words beautifully convey the bittersweet journey of love in the face of profound change. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/16/2024 1:37:00 PM
What a wonderful comment Daniel….l so appreciate your thoughts and kind words! Thankyou…always ….Debx Call me Deb no need for the M ha! X
Date: 1/15/2024 10:59:00 AM
Wonderful, Deb. So many of us live in dread of this eventuality but so many are living it now. A most worthy POTD. Congrats.
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Date: 1/16/2024 1:36:00 PM
Cheers my funny friend! Always a pleasure…Debx
Date: 1/14/2024 4:14:00 PM
A beautiful poem, so tender and poignant, t could not have been expressed better, Deb. Congratulations on POTD. A fave for me. Wow!!! Take care, Old Duck XX
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Date: 1/16/2024 1:35:00 PM
Awww my sweet lovely friend…thankyou so much! I miss you a lot! Debx
Date: 1/14/2024 5:15:00 AM
So lovely, Deb. Life and love described wonderfully. Belated Congratulations on POTD! Charliex
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Date: 1/16/2024 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Cheeky Charlie! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 9:47:00 PM
A sad and beautiful tale of love. Congratulations on POTD, Deb. Blessings and hugs. :)
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Date: 1/16/2024 1:34:00 PM
Hi Evelyn….appreciate your kind words! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 8:27:00 PM
Catches the expression of love at its most sublime...selfless giving. A very moving poem Deb, one that causes reflection and engagement in the experiece of the tragic.
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Date: 1/16/2024 1:33:00 PM
Hey Paul….so nice to see you and receive such a gracious comment! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 5:39:00 PM
such a touching piece Deb, my heart goes out to anyone in this situation and sadly its a scenario many of us can relate to:-) many congrats on POTD, hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2024 1:32:00 PM
Thankyou lovely Jan…..good to see you! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 5:35:00 PM
So poignant... and authentic. We are 'at that age' where this stuff happens too often to us. ~ Grandpa
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Date: 1/13/2024 11:21:00 PM
Thankyou Grandpa BB!! Appreciate your kind thoughts! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 5:09:00 PM
That's so sad, but so lovely and loving at the same time. That will happen to most of us at some point in our lives. A loved one will slowly slip away. I hope we will be as loving as he is or was. Congratulations on your POTD, Deb! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend! Hugs, Bill
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Date: 1/13/2024 5:16:00 PM
Thankyou my texan buddy…..always lovely to hear your thoughts my friend!…Hope you are well! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you always. love, Gina
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Date: 1/13/2024 2:34:00 PM
Thankyou Gina….God bless you also….Sebx
Date: 1/13/2024 2:00:00 PM
Dear Deb, These words are so full of truth and emotion. Never a better POTD - especially for those of us dealing with similar situations.. This is a beautiful tribute and I wish you love and blessing for all that this means x
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Date: 1/13/2024 2:34:00 PM
Hi Christopher….what a truly lovely comment with such kind words! Thankyou so so much! I am very appreciative! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 11:00:00 AM
Deb, your words hold so many tender emotions. Yesterday, my step grandmother left this world, and as my father says, she's now with my grandfather (his father) in heaven. She had this terrible disease. Cherish those around you and hold each moment close. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/13/2024 2:36:00 PM
Cuddles for you Brandy…Take good care ! Debx
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Date: 1/13/2024 1:40:00 PM
Hi Deb, I'm doing well. Life is indeed fragile. You're very welcome for the comment, my dear friend.
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Date: 1/13/2024 11:21:00 AM
Oh Brandy l am so sorry to hear that…..l hope you are doing ok…..that is so very sad! I appreciate you leaving such a lovely comment…..Thankyou….Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Your poem accentuates the fears of all seniors.
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Date: 1/13/2024 10:49:00 AM
Yes it does Hilda unfortunately….thankyou for your Congratulations l appreciate your comment! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 10:27:00 AM
An excellent selection for POTD...or any other day, Deb.
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Date: 1/13/2024 10:45:00 AM
Aww thanks very sweet Jim …l appreciate your kind words! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 10:25:00 AM
Poignant POTD, Deb. :o(
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Date: 1/13/2024 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Mr Arlo! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 10:11:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed your lovely/wonderful write again. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away...............
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Date: 1/13/2024 10:40:00 AM
Hi Paula….thankyou again dear friend! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 9:58:00 AM
Touching, and sad! Dear Poet, you have portrayed the picture of kindness and empathy dealing a terrible disease so well! Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 1/13/2024 10:40:00 AM
Thankyou so much Malabika….l appreciate your kind words! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 8:56:00 AM
Heartbreaking Deb. So well-written. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! LO :)
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Date: 1/13/2024 9:03:00 AM
Awww L.O always a pleasure to see your cute peekaboo face hehe! Thankyou so much for your congratulations! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 7:59:00 AM
So sweet, yet sad Deb. I felt your great compassion in this poem. Congratulations on the honor of POTD. God Bless..
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Date: 1/13/2024 9:02:00 AM
Hi Nancy….l appreciate your lovely comment my friend….thankyou so much! Debx
Date: 1/13/2024 6:48:00 AM
Deb, a masterful poem about a horrible disease. So deserving of POTD. Congratulations'~ Warren
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:56:00 AM
Aww thanks Warren thats so nice of you to say! I appreciate your kind thoughts! Debx
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