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The Long and Winding Road

Too much pain wrestles in my dark, forcing limps that stifle my spark. Trekking "the long and winding road," I seek You for a faith reload. Praising Your road paved with faith's seed, I will find where pain does recede.

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Date: 7/4/2025 8:38:00 AM
This was simply lovely... and touched a place in the dark that needed a bit of light... Ann
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Date: 6/22/2025 2:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading "The Long and Winding Road" write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..................
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Date: 6/19/2025 8:01:00 PM
'a faith reload' sounds like just what the Good Doctor ordered. Neat turn of phrase there, CayCay. Flex those rosaries, gw
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Date: 6/19/2025 6:28:00 PM
I like your choice of song, and the application of it in your poem. I can relate to life being a long and winding road. I hope that, through all the tears, etc. it will always lead you to where you need to be.
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Date: 6/19/2025 11:25:00 AM
Great job with this one, my dear talented friend
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Date: 6/18/2025 10:18:00 AM
spirituality at its finest -- subtle yet firm, cay!
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Date: 6/16/2025 8:17:00 PM
Beautiful- in the "Too much pain wrestles in my dark"
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Date: 6/16/2025 9:15:00 AM
A sort of prayer everyone likes. My pain will not disappear easily though. Poetry hugs.
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Date: 6/15/2025 7:24:00 PM
Dear CayCay, your prayerful poem is simply beautiful and deeply moving. The imagery is filled with emotional pain, longing and determination to "find where dark does recede. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/15/2025 12:23:00 PM
So very beautiful- enjoyed <3
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Date: 6/15/2025 5:54:00 AM
Yes, the long and winding road can lead us to our Maker, who only wants peace for us. Nice take on the theme
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/16/2025 8:52:00 AM
some dude pictured on boxes of rice, he was entering the poem, just as you were leaving, didn't you see him, sort of an orange smear? I was addressing you both in the same box, a hi and a bye. CayCay
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/15/2025 9:44:00 AM
Who's Ben?
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/15/2025 6:47:00 AM
Amen, Brother Ben! Good to see you, Tom. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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