The Lonely People

Who remembers
  songs and stories once told
of a life lived brave, solitary embers,
  loud or quiet, shy yet bold
and everybody laughs and everybody cries
 and everybody hurts to live or die.

The names unimportant now, slip unnoticed into time
 where passages of love are lost in emptiness, 
bridal gowns stored now yellowed and faded like wine
 promises never made, promises never kept 
and no one sees, no one cares, no one dares,
 all the dreams and hopes lost to memory unspared, 
forgotten people another one among so many.

Like Alice through the looking glass
 hiding down the rabbit hole
lost in the darkened silence and its sound passed
 where Eleanor Rigby swept away her soul
the petals of the dream in imaged visions fade
 of what could be but never was, never there
save the lonely people, those lonely people here.

A masquerade of faceless figured bodies on parade
 shadows of the earth's twilight hours
living for the moment, erased and betrayed
 denied their place in time and hold on power
Eleanor named only here, like Poe's lost, Lenore
 never to be remembered, brief, forgotten, evermore.






for Jerry T. Curtis' contest
Eleanor Rigby
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O5eMM2yjg98
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Lamoureux Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 2:53 PM
I really like this one. Congrats on your high placement.
Gauthier Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 8:37 PM
Congrats on your well deserved silver medal, DM.
Green Avatar
October 18, 2019 at 11:52 AM
This was fantastic, sorry I missed it the first time around. Congrats on your placement in the contest
Lamoureux Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:29 PM
You did this well, good luck in the contest.
Warrior Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Superbly done my friend...Eleanor Rigby lives on...ready for a win...^WW^ :o)
Theraven Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 10:15 AM
D,M. "Ah, look at all the lonely people... Where do they all come from? All the lonely people Where do they all belong?" -Beatles
Merryman Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 9:03 PM
This is great, DM! Well written with smooth flowing lines. Best wishes in the contest! This should do great! Blessings, Kim
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