The Little Sparrow

(INSPIRED IN PART BY A SONG BY THE GREAT FRENCH 'SOUL SINGER', EDITH PIAF)


Should we praise the chanteuse
who sang "I regret nothing"?
Was she a saint or a sociopath? 
Did she forget the peccadilloes,
the slights, the insults and harsh 
words we are so prone to?

I regret so much, so very, very much:
the chanced shaking of another's heart, 
the deafness to her tears, the blindness 
to her unsung lamentations-- 
too much a coward to love,
I would run, run away, 
even jumping an ocean to flee
what was between her and me....

Now, aging, I regret I cannot make 
amends to those lost loves.
I cannot say, "I am sorry, I was weak, 
in fear of your love--
forgive me... forgive me."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/16/2018 2:14:00 PM
Just the fact that you acknowledge those feelings of remorse now seems to be what matters most. We can't undo our wrongs, but we can take what we learned and improve in the future. A beautiful and touching poem, L.J. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/17/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn-- and if you love great singers with remarkable voices, like Elvis, Patsy Cline, Willie Nelson, check out Piaf.
Date: 7/30/2017 8:27:00 PM
Hi L.J. congrats on your win with this very tender, touching poem... :)
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Date: 7/30/2017 12:53:00 AM
So touching, melancholy and poignant, LJ, and I loved everything about this - congrats on FOURTH PLACE! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/30/2017 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Greg, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 10/18/2016 7:27:00 AM
lovely poem Len...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/18/2016 9:03:00 AM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 10/18/2016 12:16:00 AM
Well done, Len, a fine piece. Regards, Viv
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/18/2016 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Viv!
Date: 2/26/2016 12:00:00 PM
Hi Len, where would I find that comment you mentioned on my comment. LINDA
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/27/2016 9:26:00 AM
I posted the comment 2/24 after I got a few congrats--I would urge all souls to EDITH PIAF:her life was full of pain and courage--her masterwork is 'Je'ne regrette rien' -- I regret nothing. Her singing is truly thrilling-- let me know if you like it.
Date: 2/25/2016 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/24/2016 10:32:00 AM
Thank you all! And I would encourage you, if you've never heard Edith Piaf sing, to listen to her. She has the singular ability to wrench your heart while piercing your soul. I get the same 'rush' now as I did when I first heard her in college almost half a century ago.
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:17:00 AM
Wow a lovely poem Ien.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/24/2016 10:34:00 AM
thanks Doc! and please see the comment I added about Piaf's otherworldly singing.
Date: 2/23/2016 5:39:00 PM
Len, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/24/2016 10:37:00 AM
Gracias, Linda! and please check out my comment about Piaf's singing-- I find it to be one of those small miracles that make life so wondrous at times.
Date: 2/23/2016 11:21:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest len it was an honor reading:)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/24/2016 10:38:00 AM
Than you, Royal T-- and please see the comment I added about Piaf's incredible singing.
Date: 9/28/2015 12:45:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Ien!
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:58:00 PM
very nice one. Congrats for win this time.
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:44:00 AM
Ien, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/10/2015 1:47:00 AM
LEN, CONGRATS ON YOUR ANY POEM WIN..... ALWAYS & FOREVER ~~LINDA~~
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:54:00 PM
Len, thank you for supporting "my ANY POEM contest #7." Have a nice day. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:26:00 PM
An excellent write - we all all too late smart. Light & Love
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