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I see his smiles
His sisters laughter in the breeze
I confess a cold heart, warmed

When though will I be free?
From the pain of long ago years
From tears that soaked my humanity away
	I love you all
if only I could stay
   	Life seems so trivial

so when I float away
	who will

Blow out the candles
	as cake and happiness are eaten away

		ahhhhh
	
We never met
You and I

	An war or crime or crippled thoughts
	Shall never stop
	The celebration of birthday dreams
	Friendships never lost


The wishing well is full
Illuminated by an intrinsic brightness


Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/28/2018 9:20:00 PM
What a beautiful, emotive piece that appealed to me on many levels! Love it, Arthur! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 4/20/2018 10:42:00 AM
Wonderful write Art !
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Date: 3/23/2018 1:22:00 AM
Highly original Arthur, smooth as a baby's bottom...;-)
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Date: 3/19/2018 5:11:00 PM
I don't know how I missed this! I do love it and its deep and redeeming meaning. "An war or crime or crippled thoughts..."
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:12:00 AM
powerfully written; nicely done. A fantastic read.
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Date: 3/6/2018 9:55:00 PM
Arthur, congratulations on POTW with this beautiful write ~
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Date: 3/5/2018 10:29:00 AM
Hi Arthur, congratulations on you POTW. The honour is well deserved with this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Monday....Mike.
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Date: 3/5/2018 6:29:00 AM
Lovely ink Arthur, congratulations on potw! xomo
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Date: 3/4/2018 10:01:00 PM
A lovely choice for POTW Arthur! Congratulations on having it honored! : )
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Date: 3/4/2018 6:52:00 PM
POTW!! Wonderful. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/4/2018 2:59:00 PM
PotW... Love it <3 :)
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Date: 3/4/2018 11:00:00 AM
you are shining brightly with this one Arthur many congrats on POTW:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2018 1:18:00 PM
Oh, and fav!
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Date: 3/1/2018 1:16:00 PM
I just have to come back to read. Bookmarking it.
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Date: 3/1/2018 12:54:00 PM
I make out a sentimental soul reflected in these words, Arthur. Love the end lines. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/1/2018 1:40:00 AM
Art this is really quite beautiful and I think showed a softer side of you!a fave Art!
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Date: 3/1/2018 12:51:00 AM
you are always overflowing with reflecting imagery .. please share... :)
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Date: 2/28/2018 9:38:00 PM
Lovely Art <3 <3 <3
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Date: 2/28/2018 9:33:00 PM
Wow, pure Art!!! Intrinsic brightness indeed
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Date: 2/28/2018 4:21:00 PM
Great poem
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Date: 2/28/2018 2:57:00 PM
Sososo beautiful :) I love it much. Much. Much
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Date: 2/28/2018 5:55:00 AM
love this wonderful poetry, to me a journey, through a gifted mind.
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