Notes About The Poem

The Little One Is Three

I see his smiles
His sisters laughter in the breeze
I confess a cold heart, warmed

When though will I be free?
From the pain of long ago years
From tears that soaked my humanity away
	I love you all
if only I could stay
   	Life seems so trivial

so when I float away
	who will

Blow out the candles
	as cake and happiness are eaten away

		ahhhhh
	
We never met
You and I

	An war or crime or crippled thoughts
	Shall never stop
	The celebration of birthday dreams
	Friendships never lost


The wishing well is full
Illuminated by an intrinsic brightness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 9:20 PM
What a beautiful, emotive piece that appealed to me on many levels! Love it, Arthur! Best regards. Pandita
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 1:22 AM
Highly original Arthur, smooth as a baby's bottom...;-)
Wanter Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 5:11 PM
I don't know how I missed this! I do love it and its deep and redeeming meaning. "An war or crime or crippled thoughts..."
Krutsinger Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 9:12 AM
powerfully written; nicely done. A fantastic read.
La France Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Arthur, congratulations on POTW with this beautiful write ~
Raven Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Hi Arthur, congratulations on you POTW. The honour is well deserved with this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Monday....Mike.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Lovely ink Arthur, congratulations on potw! xomo
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:01 PM
A lovely choice for POTW Arthur! Congratulations on having it honored! : )
Murray Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 6:52 PM
POTW!! Wonderful. Congratulations.
White Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 2:59 PM
PotW... Love it <3 :)
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 11:00 AM
you are shining brightly with this one Arthur many congrats on POTW:-) hugs jan xx
White Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Oh, and fav!
White Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 1:16 PM
I just have to come back to read. Bookmarking it.
Callus Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 12:54 PM
I make out a sentimental soul reflected in these words, Arthur. Love the end lines. Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 12:51 AM
you are always overflowing with reflecting imagery .. please share... :)
Ella Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:38 PM
Lovely Art <3 <3 <3
Wolf Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Wow, pure Art!!! Intrinsic brightness indeed
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Great poem
White Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Sososo beautiful :) I love it much. Much. Much
Horsman Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 5:55 AM
love this wonderful poetry, to me a journey, through a gifted mind.
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