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Poetry/Senryu/the litter box
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1583-879-06
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, October 06, 2023
For the International Contest, A Hi-Poo Senryu 
Sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 10/30/2023

First Place 

Free Cat Asleep photo and picture

The Litter Box

 

litter box pungent 
a mask donned against the stink ...
        poo of my loved one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Back with my congrats, dear heart
La France Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the congrats, blessings
Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Sweet sense of love ;) Congratulations Constance! :)
La France Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the congratulation, oh yes, I love my kitty no matter how stinky she is, blessings
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Hey congrats I am pleased he gave lots of wins!
La France Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the congrats, appreciate, oh yes that was nice that John gave lots of wins, blessings
Lee Sr. Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Ahh! So what's left behind is refined thanks to the uppermost it's beautiful feline leaves her fluorescent host beautiful she is but what she has dropped it wasn't for the litter box she and the room would stink LoL great write Congrats on your #1 placement
La France Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Edward, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congrats, appreciate. Actually, if she did not poop each day in that litter box I would be so worried ! Blessings
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 7:59 AM
aww cute lil kitty poops lol many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 8:00 AM
Jan, thank you so much for the sweet comment and congrats, hugs and blessings
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 12:46 PM
I smelled that same odor last might. For sure then it's time to take out those nasty clumps. Fun one , Constance, and thanks for your last contest and all the others which are so inspiring.
La France Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the comment, and compliment, appreciate. Oh yes, every indoor cat owner knows about this stink from our beautiful cats. You are welcome on your placement in my contest.
George Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 11:12 PM
So well written Constance. The poo of the cat is so stinking. Only with a mask one can handle it. Your cat lies so comfortable after emptying her bowel. :) ;
La France Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate. Oh yes, the little box is the one thing so stinky about having a cat no matter how cute, one has to be right on it. After my cat has her poo she runs around like a banshee that's how I know there is a gift waiting.
Empress Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 9:40 PM
Awwn thats a cute pic and well written senryu. Loved this
La France Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 4:40 AM
Ink, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, how can anything so cute be so stinky !
Lane Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:55 AM
but oh, so sweet the joy kitty brings.
La France Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 7:45 AM
Lin, thank you so much for the comment, appreciate. So true, I would do anything for my sweet (sometimes stinky) kitty.
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