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The Limerick Express! (Deborah Guzzi's Limerick Game)

I heard the train comin'
With warning bells strummin'
And had to leap oughta the way!
The Guzzi Express, with no time to rest,
Steamed Highlander's limerick to play!
With chimney a smoke
Right at this poor bloke,
C. Richards did save the day!
Said I to myself, go give it a try,
Then flutter to one we call Butterfly!
Until that time, the Engineer must fixit,
And blow the horn for Jared Pickett!
*Keep the wheels rollin' .....Poet Butterfly! your next!... C. E. McMullin!
**But first! the Engineer requests the 'Master Poet' Jared Pickett! Continue The Game!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/19/2010 6:50:00 AM
I never even noticed this game or even see this poem... My apologies James!!! I still will write one for everyone to read... It has been a while anyway.... Busy man!!! Life, what can I say..... Stay tuned for my continuation of Deborahs Limerick game!!!! Good work my friend......:JP}
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Date: 8/2/2009 3:27:00 PM
Soup mail !! :)
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Date: 8/1/2009 10:23:00 PM
Nice Limerick, it followed the Limerick train well.....:JP]
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Date: 7/31/2009 4:03:00 PM
LOL Quite a game of "ping limerick" I'm glad we don't play with a stick! Jim balls are a flyin and there's no denyin, I'm only permitted to rhyme with lick????? Light & Love
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Date: 7/31/2009 7:56:00 AM
I'm having fun reading and following your limerick game with James! Krista
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Date: 7/31/2009 5:32:00 AM
Lovely limerick James, well done>>James
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Date: 7/30/2009 3:57:00 PM
Like your Limerick. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/30/2009 3:54:00 PM
She's a'comin around the mountain in style!!! ....this was a great one, James.....whooo...whooo ...chug...chug...keep up the good work!! :)
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