Brooke Dylan Poet Quatrain

The Likes of You

Dear Sir I ask of you
to remember the likes of me
your solemn ways shook my core
but it was just us in our world.....

A simply courtyard of green
encircled with cream colored glass
toasted in a warm afternoon sun
and chilled in our indigo evenings....

We will lay side by side
togetherness to be widely wide spread
with capes and pine cone needles we lay
like a king and queen....

Together will were with, the likes of us
we were all alone then
we were so new
we loved so tenderly.....

We loved so bold and blue
our colors our sunsets
were ours for the taken
so wonderful with the likes of you...

Brooke Dylan 2014

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Robert Lindley May 8, 2014 at 10:40 PM A true gem! So much passion and reflection . This is quite simply priceless.... " A simply courtyard of green encircled with cream colored glass toasted in a warm afternoon sun and chilled in our indigo evenings".... Brooke Dylan May 9, 2014 at 7:43 AM Thank you Robert...you are so nice

Vera Duggan May 8, 2014 at 9:18 PM That is so beautiful Brooke, absolutely loved the theme, you certainly do write beautiful words, a very gifted writer..............Vera................ Brooke Dylan May 8, 2014 at 9:35 PM Thank you so much vera..

Deborah Shiells May 8, 2014 at 2:23 PM Hi Brooke, WOW! This was elegant and dreamy and as always, beautiful to read. Love your writes Brooke:~) Thank you for your kindness as well. Thanks also for sharing this very nice write with us here. Peace, Deborah Brooke Dylan May 8, 2014 at 3:47 PM Thank you Deborah You are awesome poet I am honored..

David Williams May 8, 2014 at 2:13 PM Brooke I like the content very much and your choice of words are well thought out, but if I could say that as a free verse it would look better if it were not set out in quatrains, it is good, but let it just flow out....hope you don't mind me saying this....David Brooke Dylan May 8, 2014 at 3:46 PM Thank you David.. I need all the help I can get.. I appreciate it..

Aiyah Torres May 8, 2014 at 12:41 PM I like it! !..very well written lines... moving and filled w/ passion.. :O)) XOXO Brooke Dylan May 8, 2014 at 3:45 PM thank you dear AiyaH...