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Contest: Write sixteen beautiful lines, sponsored by Constance La France.

The Lighthouse at Night

The lighthouse sits upon the desolate island shore
Slowly dilapidating as its pieces fall to the ocean floor 
Seagulls and ospreys have made it their coastal home
As it sits unsafe in a place most would never dare to roam

Once it’s nighttime its prism lights are rumored to turn on
Even though the original light bulbs are all broken and gone 
Sometimes the lights can be seen at the hotel across the bay
Many guests have reported seeing it light up the open seaway

There is a legend that the lighthouse is cursed and a haunted place
Those who have ventured to visit have disappeared without a trace
Many say that on quiet nights when the moon is full and bright
A young widow can be seen pacing and crying in the lighthouse at night

It is rumored that a young bride is waiting for the return of his ship
That was lost at sea with its captain, who never returned from his trip
There are nights when the wind may carry her sounds of despair
The haunted lighthouse remains a mystery and many fear to go there
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Buhagiar Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 9:22 AM
What a wonderful picture and perfect poem. I love the hint of a haunted place. Surely you got a deserved high placement.
George Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 11:31 PM
The picture matches so well with your description, Tania. I enjoy reading about haunted places, though I don't believe in them. Beautifully written and congratulations on your top win.
Kitchin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Valsa, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 8:50 AM
- Congratulations on your sixteen beautiful lines poem, Tania :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you.
Crandall Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 8:16 PM
Great poem - this could be a movie!
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 6:53 PM
David, thank you.
Godwin Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 9:12 AM
ewwww- I got goosebumpy chills! Your imagination and your pen really worked together on this creative poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I might have to get up and shake the spooky off of me! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Kitchin Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 2:12 PM
CayCay, thank you.
Hind Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:16 PM
Beautiful, and mysterious. Enjoyed - <3
Kitchin Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 3:50 AM
Paige, thank you.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Hello Tina Kitchin, Yes this poem is sad. She does not know her husband is dead. so in spirit she is waiting for him. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 3:27 PM
Hello tina, oh you ared welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kitchin Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Darlene, thank you.
M  Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Oh my Tania….how hauntingly beautiful…l just love this poem….and the picture is perfect! Debx
Kitchin Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:06 PM
Deb, thank you.
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