The Lighter Side

heartbreak is heavy until we choose to let go dance the lighter side Heidi Sands 11/16/18

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/19/2018 7:24:00 PM

What a wonderful closing line, Heidi! I'm putting my dancing shoes on this instant! Such a lovely thought! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/20/2018 5:06:00 AM

Great to hear Gershon! Thank you :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/17/2018 11:35:00 AM

A nicely expressed sentiment Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2018 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/16/2018 9:48:00 PM

There is a brighter and lighter side if one chooses to find it and embrace it. An inspirational and lovely haiku, Heidi. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/18/2018 8:28:00 AM

Although the journey to finding the brighter and lighter side isn’t always easy that’s for sure.. :) I loved the spirit of your poem..

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/17/2018 7:17:00 AM

That's true Susan. Thank you :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 11/16/2018 10:24:00 AM

Yes

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2018 10:57:00 AM

Thank you for your visits and comments Mike :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/16/2018 10:16:00 AM

You have stated something that definitely works as long as we decide to do it. Letting go is so hard but when you do, things are definitely brighter. Nicely done Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/16/2018 10:57:00 AM

Yes, we must decide to do it and accept that it was not meant to be. There is a brighter side and we must seek it :) Thank you Chris .