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The Light of Day

Precious life slips through my careless fingers I stay in bed well past dawn miss the wonder of the morn once I labored deep in the night making sure the numbers were right tossed and turned past dawn anyway ~ never saw the light of day

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Date: 3/9/2025 8:54:00 PM
Your mind needed it Gershon.Let your body heal my friend...
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Date: 3/9/2025 3:01:00 PM
Hi again Gershon, it's Olympian Labs, not Olympic. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2025 7:33:00 PM
Appreciate your diligence, Regina. I actually take a 3-mg quick-dissolving tablet of Melatonin very occasionally. They work pretty well for me too.
Date: 3/9/2025 10:51:00 AM
Hi Gershon, I take a dropperful of liquid melatonin each night right before bed. It works well. You may want to try it if this is a real life experience. I get the Olympic Labs brand from Amazon. Great writing as usual. You and your family have a splendid Sunday afternoon. Shalom :)
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Date: 3/9/2025 9:18:00 AM
hey, if it was fun they wouldn't call it work
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2025 7:33:00 PM
Right! ~ Maynard G. Krebs
Date: 3/9/2025 5:59:00 AM
Sleep you lose lol. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2025 7:38:00 PM
Although I gain sheep --- counted!
Date: 3/9/2025 5:31:00 AM
Well said Gershon. Sometimes we work so hard we miss something as wonderful as the dawn of a new day
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/9/2025 7:39:00 PM
And it ain't worth missing!!

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