The Light Is Cast

. Clouded sky opens The light is cast upon tree Growth awaits water (After viewing Raul's latest picture)

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2010 5:42:00 AM

You did a great job interpreting the photo, Sara. Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/5/2010 5:13:00 AM

did not get to see the photo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2010 6:06:00 PM

Wonderful words for the new photo contest Sara and good luck to u ..thankxxx for your extra special comments today.. with luv..from the "Sweetheart"

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/4/2010 4:41:00 PM

beautiful haiku, Sara :) wishing you the best in the contest :)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/4/2010 9:07:00 AM

Don't bother about the mistake, Sara! I did a lot and it's "maski" to change it! "maski" is a nice Pidgin expression in Papua New Guinea and comes from the German "Macht nichts" (never mind)..As part of Papua was once German Colony until 1918. Nice image! And good luck in the contest. Thank you also for your comments...Gert

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/4/2010 8:56:00 AM

You wrote a nice 5 7 5 poem. You made a mistake - "Clouded sky opens." Keep your creative pen flowing Matthew