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The Light

All over our suburb, lights have suddenly gone out, and panic has seized our hearts. Grasping my lover’s hand in the pitch black night, I struggle as he pulls me up. My legs are flimsy noodles, absolutely useless, for try as I might, I cannot make them work. How can I expect my boyfriend to carry or even drag me along these nightmare streets? But he is my salvation and I cannot let go of his hand. Suddenly he gasps. I look instinctively upward. A bright light, white beyond all comprehension, has appeared above our town. It pulses and the pulsation begins to penetrate my being as I feel the strength returning to my limbs. I sense, but cannot yet see, that others, like my boyfriend and me, are being drawn to that spot where the light has centered its fantastical white glow. Mobile again, I walk with quickening steps beside my lover, mesmerized as we both follow that magnetic throbbing glow. There has been an immediate restoration of light to the houses which lost all light at the moment we had plunged into utter darkness. Moreover, the lights of those houses whose occupants had been sleeping are also coming on, and soon there are hundreds and hundreds of lights being turned on in all the neighborhoods as if their occupants are somehow being summoned telepathically to rise from their beds, leave their homes and come meld with those of us already on the streets. What can it be? Who can it be? Is it alien life force? Is it God? These thoughts are mine, but I actually can hear them in the minds of those who now comprise the steady stream of people who, with great anticipation, draw nearer and nearer the pulsing light which seems to be coming from a huge field on the outskirts of town. Its brilliance is beyond that of anything I’ve ever seen before - an illumination that all the lights of the town combined can not equal. As my boyfriend and I press on eagerly with the throng, I feel a warmth. Indescribable, it permeates not only the cool night air, but also my very heart and soul. I look at the kind and handsome face of my dear companion. Then I look at the throng of wonderful people, realizing they are but a fragment of the sum of humanity, and love’s warmth floods the core of me. I do not know what is coming, but if this is a dream, I wish never to awake. For "Finish the Dream" Contest by Matt Caliri

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Date: 8/16/2011 2:17:00 PM
Intruguing piece, Andrea : )
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Date: 2/2/2011 12:50:00 PM
Nice job ending the dream. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:29:00 PM
Close encounters of the third kind?
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:47:00 AM
Yep, I am a he and have been a her since I came into this world. No problem, my name is confusing enough. This was an enjoyable read. THanks for posting. Take care, Jancarl
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:17:00 AM
Fantastic story, Andrea. Lainie
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Date: 2/1/2011 9:21:00 AM
Loved the story line but like movies I hate it when there is no conclusion to a story. Must be something in me that likes a final ending ha ha Good luck on the contest. love phyl
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Date: 2/1/2011 8:59:00 AM
Amazing story and an amazing dream, Andrea! Last weeks my dreams are like serialized novels and even if I wake up and fall back into dreams, the dream continues---very strange! Enjoyed the read and thank you for your friendly ongoing comments!...Love, Gert
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Date: 2/1/2011 8:08:00 AM
Another amazing encounter of words so wonderful Andrea for the finish the dream contest.. great imagination and so well written in Narrative form.. good luck in the contest... luv the suspense in this piece my friend.. much success to u..
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Date: 2/1/2011 7:15:00 AM
In the 70's I was a small child, so I don't really know what people did but yeah I am sure some women went to bars. Not the church going types though. lol
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Date: 2/1/2011 12:20:00 AM
Awesome write!What a positive ending!Let the fountain of light shower on all of us ushering never ending hope in our mind!:) kashinath
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Date: 1/31/2011 9:54:00 PM
Cool ending to Matt's girlfriend's dream, Andrea. Good luck in the contest. I think Carolyn is big on grammar and punctuation and I laughed when I read your comment that you sacrificed grammar for meter. Hope that works out for you. lol Also, a lot is two words, right? Sorry, don't mean to get on your case but you had me laughing. Thanks, Diane
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Date: 1/31/2011 9:38:00 PM
wow, good entry, best of luck in the contest ( and re: your comment yes Max was my daughter Miranda's cat, and has now been the focus of 3 of my poems)
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:07:00 PM
good one...I saw that contest but did not know what to do...
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Date: 1/31/2011 4:57:00 PM
excellent story Andrea.....pounded alot of imagery and emotion into a few words. Well done... gotta be a winner and thanks for your comment. Hope all is well
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Date: 1/31/2011 3:40:00 PM
What a great write, Andrea....George
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Date: 1/31/2011 11:01:00 AM
whew.. waht an enormous ride with a sense of relief in the end, andrea!! this great piece grows on me... winning wishes to you! btw,i should have written about donald trump in my "fly" piece as you suggested... that would be a ball, lol.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/31/2011 10:39:00 AM
now i see where those inspired haiku's come from :)) such a beautiful way of expressing such a sensation....peace , jay
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Date: 1/31/2011 9:33:00 AM
Oh my, Wonderful read, I was on the edge of my seat. I love your ending! This is truly a winner to me Andrea. You have worked your magic again. Lov, Shar
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:53:00 AM
Awesome contest entry Andrea! Really captivating..I want to find out more! love,Deb
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:18:00 AM
Super narrative, Andrea. I tell ya what. Them be little green men, a whole damn bunch on 'em. Their noses create the intense light. Fortunately, they are friendly. Seriously, this write is an irresistible read. Thanks for liking Brother Billy. It is my favorite of all the poems I've written. Love, Dave
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:15:00 AM
There is such hope in this dream...what started out to be so frightening...is not, when surrounded by such comfort and love. Nicely done!
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