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The Life of a Mouse

Pitter patter, scurry scamper, Running through the house. squeek and screech , a frantic dash, A tiny little mouse. Searching for a morsel here, A little nibble there, Then hurry back into the nest, To nestle there with care; For seven little pinkies, All lying in a bunch, Waiting for their mama, To come back with their lunch. They must be very quiet, The people mustn't know, They share their home with even one, For then they'd have to go. Life is hard on little mice. Home and hearth come hard. They're prey to everything it seems. They must stay on their guard. She didn't see the owl today, Just made it to door matt. It's bad enough to have to dodge, That big, mean, nasty cat; And yesterday was almost caught, Beneath the old wood pile. A weasel hunting there for food, Near chased her for a mile; But Mama's here now little ones, No need for now to fear. Just be quiet,, snuggle close, We're safe and warm in here. Judy Ball

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/19/2011 7:05:00 PM
Your critter poems are amazing and I just love them as I do the real thing.
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/19/2011 8:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Liz. I love writing them too. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/19/2011 6:51:00 PM
awww, that is a cute poem! I really enjoyed reading it a lot!! Keep up the great work!
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/19/2011 8:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Russ. Glad you like them. I enjoy writing them. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/19/2011 11:59:00 AM
cool, it's like a sequel to the owl and weasel poems I read. Or maybe a prequel! In any event, your animal poems are charming and would make a nice children book with illustrations!
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:18:00 AM
such a cute family story of the mouse Judy and although most are repelled by the rodent family u gave this little mama personality .. nice one my friend..luv.
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Date: 8/19/2011 7:32:00 AM
Very nicely done Judy. Tony
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/19/2011 10:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Tony. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/19/2011 3:42:00 AM
Judy, this is a wonderfully delightful poem that IMHO should be worthy of publication in any good book of poems - especially for children. I especially like the viewpoint of the mother mouse protecting her young, giving us a different perspective on the usual "Kill the mouse" routine! It makes me think about the importance of ALL life in a merry little way. And thanks again for your thoughts on Grandmasters of Poetica. Cheers, Terry Martin
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/19/2011 5:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Terry for such lovely words of encouragement. Glad you liked it so much. God Bless, JB

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