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The Life I Make

THE LIFE I MAKE
Life is bright, I make it brighter than the sparkling lone crystal star to glitter in ecstasy in my astral space. Life is slow, I make it slower than the sea-mouth sluggish river to reach destination with innate fluid grace. Life is quiet, I make it quieter than the leaf-cradled drop of water to listen to the soul in silence for solace.
September 22, 2018 Rhyme scheme : aab

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Date: 9/29/2018 7:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Subimal - nice imagery.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/1/2018 2:11:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes.
Date: 9/29/2018 12:53:00 AM
CONGRATS to win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/29/2018 2:45:00 AM
Many thanks.
Date: 9/28/2018 7:43:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Subimal. Well done.
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Date: 9/28/2018 7:23:00 PM
sound like you've got life sorted Subimal, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/29/2018 2:45:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Yes, trying to.
Date: 9/28/2018 4:07:00 PM
well done, very clever write congrats anthony
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/29/2018 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, Anthony for the placement.

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