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Poets notes: I have never done a poem as if I was the person I was actually writing too. Just an idea popped into my head, of course this is all fictitious, and nothing to do with Becca’s real life, simply inspired by her poem titled “ Why I Distrust Men “

 

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The Library of Trust and Hope
The Bank of Trust and Hope

(Cant decide on title, so feel free to pick or suggest one)

She was all but four years of age
Birthdays were such magical moments
The cake was filled with candles
The balloons still in their package twelve on the table

Daddy daddy, I can not fill these balloons!!
They are not magic like you said!!!!!
Do not fret Maria, its daddy who is magical
I shall help you little one, let me see those balloons

Sure enough daddy blew up twelve white and pink balloons
Maria was in awe at daddy’s magical powers
She knew her daddy would fight dragons to bring her but a smile
Maria knew she was safe in daddy's arms, oh what a birthday this will be

Maria was now ten years older
Fourteen years old and already filled with so many happy memories
On this fall day, home from school
There was grandpa in the back yard as usual

He was tending his garden of roses
When she was younger, he told her they were magical roses
Grandma would speak to him in his magical garden
From the heavens above


Now at eighteen, daydreaming in a coffee shop
A stranger picks up a rose from an empty table
A smile oozing in charm, stares into her eyes
This is for you, beauty for beauty


She was swept off her feet, in a whirlwind romance
They danced and dined, it seemed all on her dime
Until the morning she awoke, completely alone
Both lover and credit cards did abscond


Now twenty one, and wise to the world
Absorbed in her studies, somewhat colder than one should be for that age
A chilly fall day in an empty library
A stranger comes, giving her a drawing of a red rose

Hello he says! I drew this for you!
Oh no she thinks to herself, not another one!
Politely she smiles and replies thank-you, but I am taken
This stranger smiles right back and says, the drawing is for you no matter

The next week, and the weeks after, the same routine
He comes to her with a drawing of another beautiful rose
She politely declines his advances
Maria knows that a rose, has a stem, and that comes with pricks

The twelfth week and here he is again
What is the poor girl to do?
She is curious, and she can not quite help herself
She asks, from what do you draw such beautiful flowers?

He smiles kindly and replies
How about next week, I show you?
We can have a coffee, and discuss art
Hesitating she just can not say no to this simple gesture of kindness

They are walking along, and surprisingly she finds herself
Quite intrigued with the ease of their conversation
He takes hold of her hand, and says I live over there, the house in red
She has no time to object as he pulls her forward to the backyard

She stares in absolute shock and awe at what appears before her
Why its the most beautiful, wonderful, enchanting English garden she ever saw
You? she stammers, you made this?
He smiles shyly and says; well now you know what inspires my drawings

Now Maria is eighty and filled with both happiness and sadness
Her husband of all these years has passed on
To be with all his precious roses in the heavens waiting
She sits in their garden, remembering a life time of memories

She picks a single rose, and inhales its fragrance
Contemplating the wisdom's of life
I miss you so much my love
You taught me trust is earned and not given
	Your love was my blanket of happiness, wait for me my love, 
		I am yours eternally





Dear Reader

I was lucky in life to have had a good upbringing. My daddy, showered me with love, but most of all he taught me that gifts were not objects, balloons were not magical, nor was he. I learned that what was magical is the time and effort he took to love me, and protect me and those memories I so cherish, but they also he showed me the values I hold dear in myself and those around me. 

Then there was dear old grandpa. His garden was his passion, and I suspect that if I could have had more time to spend with him, it was really grandma’s passion, and after her passing, this was the activity that kept him close to her soul. In that respect, I guess it was truly a magical garden. Whenever he saw me, his eyes would light up, he would pour lemonades and he told me such wonderful stories. Unlike many though, he listened to all my troubles and told me, that in life I had to learn some things the hard way, but that he himself knew for a certainty that I would find the love and happiness, that as a young women, I felt would be lost to me forever.

I re-tell my story for all the people out there that have lost trust in others, or have lost hope in humanity. You may have your heart stolen for awhile, someone can bring you sadness, but never let them steal your soul. Learn that trust is earned, not given, and never punish the rest of the world, for your bad experience, for ultimately it is you who suffers most. Be giving, kind and generous, with a strong will and mind. If someone does not respect you, then they shall never earn your trust, and that’s how it should be. Be wise, be prudent, be safe, but most of all be open to love and kindness

God bless
Maria Sefue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/8/2017 11:27:00 PM
Delightful. Wonderful read.
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Date: 8/30/2017 4:14:00 PM
Love this write, my mom had our driveway lined with roses with the water faucet right there. Roses remind me of my mom who is my hero. I wrote a poem called Lillian about her. Thank you for liking my Memories poem :)
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Date: 6/27/2017 5:08:00 PM
Maria, This wonderful poem of yours was posted two years ago. I am so glad I happened across it. It is wonderful. A thought: If you are still working on the title, a Bank or a Library are both repositories; places where you put things for safe-keeping. But Trust and Hope require work to maintain; cultivation to perfect, like the beautiful garden you depict. May I suggest "The Garden of Trust and Hope" as a title? - Dean
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Date: 5/23/2017 5:12:00 PM
What a beautiful read! I thoroughly enjoyed this, Arthur.
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Date: 2/22/2016 4:35:00 PM
Magical title! Magically written! Well done.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/22/2016 9:39:00 PM
Thank you, I really appreciate such nice comments!
Date: 2/21/2016 10:12:00 PM
I am so moved by "The Garden." there are no words to describe such a memorable piece. a work of art.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/22/2016 9:39:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 2/5/2016 3:43:00 AM
Oh my gosh. It's beautiful! It sure moved me - almost set me to tears. A sure thumbs up! Very nice!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/6/2016 1:36:00 AM
What a nice compliment thank you so much!
Date: 2/4/2016 8:53:00 PM
Beautiful, there are recurring signs in all our lives if we open our eyes to see them. This captured that idea perfectly. Loved it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/6/2016 1:36:00 AM
Thank you again Amy, much appreciated! :)
Date: 2/4/2016 3:26:00 PM
Breathtaking believable write Arthur filled with the undying want for love and trust. Beautiful
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/6/2016 1:35:00 AM
Thank you again Kelli for taking the time to read! :)
Date: 2/4/2016 2:07:00 PM
A delightful poem Arthur! ans quite a story... lovingly told with charm and beautiful descriptions. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/6/2016 1:34:00 AM
Thank you Keith, from whom I call the "King of Poets" I really appreciate your kind words!
Date: 11/20/2015 11:10:00 PM
I enjoyed very much this poem. An example of true love.
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Nayda, my apologies for delay, I missed this comment :(
Date: 11/11/2015 3:22:00 AM
WOW....magical words friend. thank you so very much.. you got a favs and a 7 :) love and peace dear :) :*
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/11/2015 2:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, I really appreciate such kind words!!!
Date: 11/10/2015 8:29:00 AM
Your words and feelings have left their impression on the hearts of many readers. The freshness of life and sting of death are well represented in your words and comes out well in your poem as they adorn the page with their starkness of truth love and sadness. Emile. #7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/11/2015 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Emile, You are always so kind with praise, a true poet indeed.
Date: 11/9/2015 3:44:00 PM
Hey, Arthur, get busy on some poems. My contest is super easy. Go for it!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/9/2015 9:43:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! I have lots of stuff in the works!
Date: 10/27/2015 8:03:00 AM
It seems your fans are wanting something new. I enjoyed reading this one again Arthur. I have missed your comments. I hope all is well.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/9/2015 9:42:00 PM
Thanks Richard, yes been away, just got back, posted a few photos on the blog, you might like to see! I am looking forward to catch up on reading here!
Date: 10/21/2015 1:59:00 AM
still enjoying this, arthur.. but, i hope to read something just as good as this soon.. huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/21/2015 2:01:00 AM
So kind of you Nette! Yes have been a bit busy, but I do hope to have a few things in the works soon! Hugs!
Date: 10/18/2015 8:21:00 PM
Great story, loved it, your as good as Bob Dylon, only if someone could put it to music!
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Date: 10/18/2015 7:35:00 PM
Just came to tell ya how much I enjoyed your fun comment on my embarrassing moments poem. Don't worry. I was too blind to see anything. DANG!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/18/2015 7:39:00 PM
Well it made me smile, as I do swim just about every day!!!
Date: 10/14/2015 7:24:00 PM
Dear Arthur Hey my friend need a good laugh tonight go check out my Trick or Treat in Jurassic Park, but I must warn you beware and fear the pink dino-sour lol, night, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/14/2015 10:18:00 PM
:) oki doki!
Date: 10/14/2015 5:31:00 PM
Dear Arthur Wow again on this one, the inspiration it gives to the reader is awesome, you've put alot of thought and feeling into this loved it for the second time, my old friend, you've done your talent justice with this one, bravo, and I don't believe what you said also in my comment box, I bet there is a Zombie out there that would love you, lol just kidding there is somebody out there for you don't worry you just got to have some faith in yourself until she comes around, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/14/2015 10:17:00 PM
Thank you Cherl! :)
Date: 10/12/2015 11:33:00 AM
Dear Arthur Inspirational story, your quite a storyteller my friend the depths of emotions and warmth of your lines are simply touching, and fill the reader with a sense of devotional loving, great job, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/12/2015 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Cherl!!! :)
Date: 10/12/2015 7:41:00 AM
I think the appropriate tile would be : "Investment in Trust and Hope" Opening the door of our inner world is an opening in trust and hope but we expect a dividend out of this opening of the account, of investment. A fabulous write that certainly surpasses the normal levels of poetic expression. Congratulations! A seven is too late to give, nevertheless I do give, dear Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/12/2015 7:38:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios, always love to hear from you!
Date: 10/12/2015 7:31:00 AM
Your noble write touched my heart Arthur! Your write is extreme wise and excellent and congratulations for POTW. A wonderful write indeed brilliant one........A.M.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/12/2015 7:37:00 PM
Thank you Afolabi, is so nice to receive such wonderful comments from you.
Date: 10/10/2015 3:43:00 PM
Hi Arthur. Late it may be, I'd like to congratulate you on a well-deserved POTW! A real pleasure to read, one that will touch anyone who's still open to the beauty of a well-intentioned write, no matter in what form it comes. Did I say it's one of my favs? Hugs!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/10/2015 8:09:00 PM
Hi Kim you are so sweet, thank you!
Date: 10/10/2015 3:11:00 PM
Your Poem of the week is most intriguing. I love how it all comes together. For that one and only purpose. Congrats on the POW!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/10/2015 8:08:00 PM
Thank you!
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