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The Lemon Hit My Nose At Full Force

The lemon hit my nose at full force, the second the lid was off. I ran into the kitchen, disbelieving For I had already devoured two this month, and my husband was not speaking to me due to my nasty disposition. I fell into his arms, leaning over him with a butter knife, slicing a tiny piece of lemon pound cake, gloating that he thought it was all about him

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Date: 1/16/2019 9:44:00 PM
You mean it wasn't?! Signed, A Duhmb Husband. (LOL). Cute one. ~ Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/17/2019 9:42:00 PM
I am a fooler, but my husband knows me well. He usually catches me eventually.
Date: 1/15/2019 8:42:00 PM
Love this one, Caren, and lemon pound cake too! If you're not averse to a little loving compliments I'd say your writing is improving with every new posting! Can't say that for every Souper. Keep at it. Glad you enjoyed my limerick on greedy politicians. / M
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/16/2019 2:18:00 AM
Maurice, what a wonderful thing to say! I am thrilled as sometimes I think "why in the world did you post THAT?" after I already have.
Date: 1/15/2019 5:17:00 PM
Yum, I like a little cake with my frosting though!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/16/2019 2:19:00 AM
I do too; and lemon is a terrific motivator for me. I love it in all of its habitats - lemon pudding, lemon meringue pie, lemon squares, lemonade, lemon tea, lemon poundcake.
Date: 1/15/2019 12:31:00 PM
Sometimes you just have to have one.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/15/2019 12:36:00 PM
I know. Right?

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