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The Last Word

THE LAST WORD as barbs fly back and forth and tempers rise do you often disagree and keep feeding fire that keeps dissention flowing in downward spiral as things are said that are not meant fatal stings of verbal attacks cause damages breaking relationships not fixed or refurbished beyond repair as we dwell in conceited pride gratification and delight in a victorious prize as arrows are shot back and forth in rancorous bitter ruthless verbal combat of private crusade try turn the next painful targeted aim to apology and value relationships through a humble defeat © Kim van Breda—May 2014

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Date: 5/22/2014 7:55:00 PM
Such wise words Kim....sometimes people keep grudges and keep the fires burning...
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Date: 5/22/2014 10:46:00 AM
- Someone has to have the last word no matter how wrong it is - Well written, Kim! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2014 12:21:00 AM
hi Kim,, I feel the need to read this poem again. I like the mood, it identifies within every line..... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/22/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thank you-- something different from my usual format. xxxx
Date: 5/21/2014 7:23:00 PM
Kim, I'm the kind of person, who needs to have the last word... great poem...Linda
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Date: 5/22/2014 8:34:00 AM
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/22/2014 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Linda.. yip.. me too. I think it is a 'girl thing' :)

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