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The last verse is not the song

Jack sits in the wheelchair in the grass a rebel nerd, he thinks of the time when he cycled up Teton Pass by a stream through walls of pine Obsessed, this viewpoint vampire his memory full of hill and vale A landscape loon, an odd desire But now his body is his jail The harried nurse to her surprise Distracted from a patient's cries sees a vision in Jack's fogged eyes lakes and forests and crimson skies [chorus] In each scene, views so grand At six thousand feet, he biked along Never quite reached the Promised Land But the last verse is not the song Kate sits in the same old age home A relic from a bygone show Her friends long dead, she's now alone Her melody no longer on the radio She was warm and could be all heart Now a meteor in afterburn She knows that bodies fall apart Resigned or not, the wheel must turn. [outro] Jack and Kate were luckier than some They were free, knew right from wrong They lived a long life, and had their fun The last verse is not the song.

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Date: 5/23/2024 8:21:00 PM
A sad ending for many people. Thank you for this look upon end of life.
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Mark Springer
Date: 5/24/2024 2:05:00 AM
Thank you for the comment. I showed this poem to a few people before posting it, and they were uncertain about it, especially verse #2. I knew a man in his youth who was a cyclist over the Alps before it was fashionable. He went to Cambridge, became a famous physicist, and ended up in a nearby old age home. I knew another man who used to hike in the Alps himself, became a rich businessman, and then his mind faded. He lived over a 100, but he wasn't 'there'. I've known a Geographer whose encyclopedic knowledge was lost in steps because of ministrokes. It's truly tragic.
Date: 5/23/2024 10:11:00 AM
These lyrics tell a poignant story of two individuals, Jack and Kate, reflecting on their lives and experiences as they spend their later years in an old age home. The narrative intertwines themes of memory, loss, and the inevitability of aging, contrasted with the vibrant lives they once led. The opening lines introduce Jack, who sits in a wheelchair, reminiscing about cycling up Teton Pass. This imagery of natural beauty and physical activity sharply contrasts with his current immobility
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Date: 5/23/2024 9:42:00 AM
Very interesting, Mark! Indeed, great in lyric and love the title and muse of the poem. We sit in our rockers or wheelchairs, the wind at our backs, barely reminiscing, wishing we were back on the precipice, could hear the new, old lyrics to our favorite songs. I served at a home, and thought what might be in the head of the nearly deaf and memory care patients. I will see them in heaven…
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Date: 5/24/2024 1:53:00 AM
Thank you. I've also seen the end of life for a few of my relatives, and it was heartbreaking.

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