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The Last Train From Childhood

Nineteen forty four I rode my first train. Oh, what a joyous, grownup thing it was! Heading for the forest and off the Plain Lifts the young spirit like little else does. Stopped in Dallas - busiest place I'd seen! People rushing to trains seemed everywhere. But something was wrong with this Texas scene - Many were strange and it caused me to stare It seemed like a hundred, or maybe more, Had "POW" stamped on their clothes. Broad striped shirts and pants of denim they wore. The war was far away -could these be those? Then I saw a look on my momma's face. Something or someone had taken its toll. Past and present came together in place - Depression, the war, the hated dust bowl. They all rolled into prisoners of war, And so she cried with a quivering lip. Something I had thought would always be far Caused a laughing childhood to lose its grip. So I put away the games I had played - Thought of grownup things as I thought I should. The memory of Dallas rightly stayed At the front as the last train from childhood. 4/18/18 For contest An Early Childhood Memory for Line Gauthier

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Date: 4/27/2018 12:48:00 AM
wow, that was quite a write, Larry. So powerful and sad that this was your childhood's end. My mom grew up on a farm during that time so she said at least they were fed. Congrats on what I am sure was a well deserved win.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/27/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. That was a good time - if any time was good in a war - to be a farmer!
Date: 4/25/2018 8:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Larry, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/27/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Eve
Date: 4/25/2018 2:38:00 PM
Well-written! Congratulations on your win.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/27/2018 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 4/25/2018 10:01:00 AM
A lovely emotional write with great rhythm. Congrats on your well deserved bronze medal win, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/27/2018 11:19:00 AM
Thank you, Line!!
Date: 4/21/2018 11:29:00 AM
What a great story, gorgeously written.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/27/2018 11:22:00 AM
Thank you, Dale!
Date: 4/21/2018 5:47:00 AM
your poem transported me to that place and well written.enjoyed reading it ,have a great time:)
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Date: 4/20/2018 1:23:00 PM
1944...what an impression that made on you...it was your last train from childhood...All the best Larry
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/20/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo!

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