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The Last Time I Peeked In Mama's Room

I wondered how she would act that day. Her door was ajar; I peeked in. The scene I saw made me pray. She looked so angry; then I feared she’d come out. Would she whip me? Would she shout? Why would she? I, she had often said, was very bad; so she’d stay in bed, take pills, rant, cry, and drink. Why could Mama not love me? That’s when I saw the gun. I think the scene I saw, no one could un-see.
FICTION December 31, 2018, entered in John Lawless's Slap the Muse Contest This one got NA'd--not once, but twice! Can you imagine? This poem deserves to place because--well, because it's a masterpiece. This fact must be obvious to you, to anyone! :-) Date: May 16, 2019 Contest Title: The Applicable Not Applicable Contests Sponsor: Richard Lamoureaux
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Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 2:38 PM
oh my, it ends up very badly!! Indeed a scene that can never be unseen. This is a difficult challenge for me. I must put my thinking cap on as you aptly did.
Canerdy Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 6:53 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Janice
One Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 7:56 AM
This is so sad Janice.. You expressed such sadness in a restricted form..
Canerdy Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 2:34 PM
THANKS, S.O.! Janice
Smith Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Sure hope this was fiction Janice, best wishes and Happy New Year...
Canerdy Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Yes, it's fiction. Happy New Year. Janice
Gauthier Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Wow - that is an eye-popper. Well penned, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thanks so much, Line! Janice
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