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The Last Time

David W. Oteman 3250 E. Fort Lowell Rd. #316 Tucson, AZ. 85716 dwoteman@hotmail.com 520-325- 8304 Lyrics to: The Last Time 2014 V1: If I knew the last time I said goodbye Would be the last time We'd speak, you and I, I'd have said that I'll love you Forever V2: If I knew the last time I held you tight Would be the last time We would say goodnight I'd have held you in my arms Forever Chorus: But with these chances gone by Don't think I'll even try To remember how I loved you so So very long ago Bridge: Just my mind's reflections Playing with my head How clearly I hear know All the things I never said V3: If I knew the last time I kissed your cheek Would be the last time We would ever meet I'd have given thousands more Forever V4: If I knew the last time I saw your smile Would be the last time I looked in your eyes I'd have broken down and cried Forever Chorus: But with these chances gone by Don't think I'll even try To remember how I loved you so So very long ago

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/19/2014 4:07:00 PM

heartbreaking romantic write - love the repetition of If i knew the last time... Hugs Jan xxx

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2014 10:22:00 AM

David,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/13/2014 12:38:00 PM

Hi David, thank you for sharing this beautiful, melancholy, inspirational write that I truly enjoyed reading! Well done!

James Hyler

Date: 7/9/2014 12:13:00 PM

Thank you for sharing :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2014 7:58:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, David :) - I choose your first well written (lyric) poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 2:44:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, David. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:23:00 PM

A moving verse, David, well enjoyed , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@