JC Brul Poet Free verse

The last time

When was the last time
your hand held mine
'neath a sleepy night?

When was the last time
you tell the moon to smile
whilst our eyes entwined?

You whisper,  "I love you"
Yet today might be the last, too ~
So, stay a little longer.

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Neha Padhi July 29, 2026 at 5:39 AM A longing so pristine, that the heart wants just a moment more! Loved the expression! Kudos JC!

I Am Anaya July 18, 2026 at 2:10 PM I too, but glad you did, Unica Hija, sounds so poetic. The longing of love is always there. Blessings

Valsa George July 17, 2026 at 2:42 AM Dear Jez, you are causing confusion by changing your names. I didn't know it was you. Only by looking at your poems, l could make out. This is a lovely little poem, so romantic.

sara Etgen-Baker July 8, 2026 at 3:39 PM awww, just sweet.

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2026 at 1:34 AM So very sweet. Love this

Alison A Smith July 1, 2026 at 6:40 AM May we never be parted.